These are the final copy updates

src/_collections/access/03-audit-submissions.md

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 Once you have signed in using Login.gov, you’ll see all of the single audit submissions associated with your account and their status. 
 
-Audits still in progress can be edited. To do so, click “In progress” next to the report ID in the table.
+You can edit audits that are still in progress by clicking "In progress" next to the report ID in the table.

src/_collections/access/06-update-cert-official.md

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-There may only be one Auditor Certifying Official and one Auditee Certifying Official per single audit submission. By submitting a new official, you will be removing the current official listed. 
+Each audit submission can have only one Auditor Certifying Official and one Auditee Certifying Official. Submitting a new official will replace the current one.
 
-Keep in mind that the Auditor Certifying Official may not be the same individual listed as the Auditee Certifying Official and may not be the same as any of the Audit Editors.
+The Auditor Certifying Official must be a different individual from the Auditee Certifying Official and cannot be one of the Audit Editors.

src/_collections/access/07-manage-audit-editor.md

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 To add a new Audit Editor, click the “Add editor” button below the table. There is no limit to the number of Audit Editors that can be on a single audit submission. 
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-At this time, you can’t remove editors but we are working to add that feature in the future.

src/_collections/access/08-add-audit-editor.md

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-To add a new Audit Editor, enter their name and email address associated with their Login.gov account.
+To add a new Audit Editor, enter their name and **the email address associated with their [Login.gov](https://login.gov/) account.**