Describe the Magic Button test #2
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* intro proofreeding pass * what is gender proofreading pass > (more about that in the Causes of Gender Dysphoria section) Is it possible to make this link to the section? * history of gender dysphoria proofreading pass * disclaimer proofreading pass * gender euphoria proofreading pass Would it be worth linking to [the Wikipedia article for Plato's cave allegory](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Allegory_of_the_cave)? * physical dysphoria proofreading pass * biochemical dysphoria proofreading pass * social dysphoria proofreading pass I'm assuming the forgotten adjective in "surprisingly phenomenon" was something like "common", so please correct it if it's wrong * societal dysphoria proofreading pass > [...] (beyond the discomfort that women experience, as this includes genuine attention, not just unwanted attention). Recommend rewording this, as it seems to imply that the discomfort women experience is what includes genuine attention rather than the discomfort AFAB trans people experience * sexual dysphoria proofreading pass * presentational dysphoria proofreading pass * existential dysphoria proofreading pass > Sometimes existential dysphoria can manifest existentially strongly recommend rewording for redundancy reasons * managed dysphoria proofreading pass * impostor syndrome proofreading pass > ***[YES, YOU ARE TRANS ENOUGH](https://www.amazon.com/Yes-You-Are-Trans-Enough/dp/1785923153/)*** do we really have to support Jeff Bezos? * Update am-i-trans.md "it’s nearly impossible avoid listening to oneself over others." has been reworded as "it’s nearly impossible to avoid listening to others over oneself." as the former seems contradictory to the rest of the paragraph, but I may be missing something, so please correct me if it's wrong I also suggest rewording "I thought being dysphoric all the time was normal human behavior" so as to not imply that dysphoria is a behavior and therefore a choice Also could use confirmation that "If you want to be a girl and you’ve always thought of yourself as a guy, then you will probably be happier living as a girl." is worded correctly * Clinical Diagnoses proofreading pass Some of these changes are to bring the wording somewhat closer to the text of the DSM-5 without making it too binary-centric * missed one * Treating Gender Dysphoria proofreading pass "A newly developing area of bottom surgery is in AMAB non-binary operations which attempt to perform vaginoplasty *without* the removal of the penis. This particular surgery is extremely experimental and has been performed less than a dozen times in the United States, but the outlook for the future is good." Highly recommend a source on this (admittedly mostly because it interests me personally and I couldn't find anything about it when I looked it up) * Causes of Gender Dysphoria proofreading pass * Chromosomes proofreading pass * forgot some * Hormones proofreading pass * Androgenic Second Puberty proofreading pass * Estrogenic Second Puberty proofreading pass Removed dead link to https://youtu.be/OROoZzoVwfk?t=12 * Conclusion proofreading pass * Patch 8 (#1) * Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124) * fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation * feat(pt): add main text translation * feat(pt): add tweets translation * feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow * fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes * fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header * fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1 The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions. * fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs * fix(build): slugify.js * fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations. * chore: add .vscode to .gitignore * pt: update index.md to match the current English version * pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md * pt: small fixes for historia.md * pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar" * pt: more small fixes * Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld --------- Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com> * Patch 5 (#2) * Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124) * fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation * feat(pt): add main text translation * feat(pt): add tweets translation * feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow * fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes * fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header * fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1 The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions. * fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs * fix(build): slugify.js * fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations. * chore: add .vscode to .gitignore * pt: update index.md to match the current English version * pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md * pt: small fixes for historia.md * pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar" * pt: more small fixes * Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld --------- Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com> * Patch 4 (#3) * Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124) * fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation * feat(pt): add main text translation * feat(pt): add tweets translation * feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow * fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes * fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header * fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1 The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions. * fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs * fix(build): slugify.js * fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations. * chore: add .vscode to .gitignore * pt: update index.md to match the current English version * pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md * pt: small fixes for historia.md * pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar" * pt: more small fixes * Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld --------- Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com> * Patch 3 (#4) * Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124) * fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation * feat(pt): add main text translation * feat(pt): add tweets translation * feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow * fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes * fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header * fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1 The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions. * fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs * fix(build): slugify.js * fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations. * chore: add .vscode to .gitignore * pt: update index.md to match the current English version * pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md * pt: small fixes for historia.md * pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar" * pt: more small fixes * Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld --------- Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com> * Patch 6 (#5) * Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124) * fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation * feat(pt): add main text translation * feat(pt): add tweets translation * feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow * fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes * fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header * fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1 The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions. * fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs * fix(build): slugify.js * fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations. * chore: add .vscode to .gitignore * pt: update index.md to match the current English version * pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md * pt: small fixes for historia.md * pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar" * pt: more small fixes * Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld --------- Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com> * Patch 7 (#6) * Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124) * fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation * feat(pt): add main text translation * feat(pt): add tweets translation * feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow * fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes * fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header * fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1 The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions. * fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs * fix(build): slugify.js * fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations. * chore: add .vscode to .gitignore * pt: update index.md to match the current English version * pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md * pt: small fixes for historia.md * pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar" * pt: more small fixes * Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld --------- Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com> * Link directly to book publisher's page instead of Amazon --------- Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com>
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