doc: incorporate Go reference document changes for Alpha release

network/delegate_packet_proxy.go

@@ -19,14 +19,14 @@ import (
 	"sync/atomic"
 )
 
-// DelegatePacketProxy is a PacketProxy that forwards calls (like NewSession) to another PacketProxy. To create a
-// DelegatePacketProxy with the default PacketProxy, use NewDelegatePacketProxy. To change the underlying PacketProxy,
-// use SetProxy.
+// DelegatePacketProxy is a [PacketProxy] that forwards calls (like NewSession) to another [PacketProxy]. To create a
+// DelegatePacketProxy with the default PacketProxy, use [NewDelegatePacketProxy]. To change the underlying
+// [PacketProxy], use SetProxy.
 //
-// Note: After changing the underlying PacketProxy, only new NewSession calls will be routed to the new PacketProxy.
-// Existing sessions will not be affected.
+// Note: After the underlying [PacketProxy] is changed, only new NewSession calls will be routed to the new
+// [PacketProxy]. Existing sessions will not be affected.
 //
-// Multiple goroutines may invoke methods on a DelegatePacketProxy simultaneously.
+// Multiple goroutines can simultaneously invoke methods on a DelegatePacketProxy.
 type DelegatePacketProxy interface {
 	PacketProxy
 

network/device.go

@@ -20,14 +20,14 @@ import (
 )
 
 var (
-	// ErrMsgSize is the error returned by a Write on a network device that the size of the message to be sent is bigger
-	// than the maximum message size the device can process.
+	// ErrMsgSize is the error returned by a Write on a network device. It means that the size of the message to be
+	// sent is bigger than the maximum message size the device can process.
 	ErrMsgSize = fmt.Errorf("packet size is too big: %w", syscall.EMSGSIZE)
 )
 
 // IPDevice is a generic network device that reads and writes IP packets. It extends the [io.ReadWriteCloser]
-// interface. For better memory efficiency, we also recommend implementing the [io.ReaderFrom] and
-// [io.WriterTo] interfaces if possible.
+// interface. For better memory efficiency, we also recommend that you implement the [io.ReaderFrom] and [io.WriterTo]
+// interfaces if possible.
 //
 // Some examples of IPDevices are a virtual network adapter or a local IP proxy.
 type IPDevice interface {

network/doc.go

@@ -14,10 +14,10 @@
 
 /*
 The network package defines interfaces and provides utilities for network layer (OSI layer 3) functionalities. For
-example, the [IPDevice] interface can be used to read and write IP packets from a physical or virtual network device.
+example, you can use the [IPDevice] interface to read and write IP packets from a physical or virtual network device.
 
-In addition, user-space network stack implementations are also included in the sub-packages (such as
-network/lwip2transport) that can translate raw IP packets into TCP/UDP flows. You can implement a [PacketProxy]
-to handle UDP traffic, and a [transport.StreamDialer] to handle TCP traffic.
+In addition, the sub-packages include user-space network stack implementations (such as network/lwip2transport) that
+can translate raw IP packets into TCP/UDP flows. You can implement a [PacketProxy] to handle UDP traffic, and a
+[transport.StreamDialer] to handle TCP traffic.
 */
 package network

network/errors.go

@@ -20,14 +20,14 @@ import (
 
 // Portable analogs of some common errors.
 //
-// Errors returned from this package and all sub-packages may be tested against these errors with [errors.Is].
+// Errors returned from this package and all sub-packages can be tested against these errors using [errors.Is].
 var (
 	// ErrClosed is the error returned by an I/O call on a network device or proxy that has already been closed, or that is
-	// closed by another goroutine before the I/O is completed. This may be wrapped in another error, and should normally
+	// closed by another goroutine before the I/O is completed. This can be wrapped in another error, and should normally
 	// be tested using errors.Is(err, network.ErrClosed).
 	ErrClosed = errors.New("network device already closed")
 
-	// ErrPortUnreachable is an error that indicates a remote server's port cannot be reached. This may be wrapped in
+	// ErrPortUnreachable is an error that indicates a remote server's port cannot be reached. This can be wrapped in
 	// another error, and should normally be tested using errors.Is(err, network.ErrPortUnreachable).
 	ErrPortUnreachable = errors.New("port is not reachable")
 )

network/packet_proxy.go

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ import (
 // PacketProxy handles UDP traffic from the upstream network stack. The upstream network stack uses the NewSession
 // function to create a new UDP session that can send or receive UDP packets from PacketProxy.
 //
-// Multiple goroutines may invoke methods on a PacketProxy simultaneously.
+// Multiple goroutines can simultaneously invoke methods on a PacketProxy.
 type PacketProxy interface {
 	// NewSession function tells the PacketProxy that a new UDP socket session has been started (using socket as an
 	// example, a session will be started by calling the bind() function). The PacketProxy then creates a
@@ -34,14 +34,14 @@ type PacketProxy interface {
 }
 
 // PacketRequestSender sends UDP request packets to the [PacketProxy]. It should be implemented by the [PacketProxy],
-// who must implement the WriteTo method to process the request packets. PacketRequestSender is typically called by an
-// upstream component (such as a network stack). Once the Close method is called, there will be no more requests sent
-// to the sender, and all resources can be freed.
+// which must implement the WriteTo method to process the request packets. PacketRequestSender is typically called by
+// an upstream component (such as a network stack). After the Close method is called, there will be no more requests
+// sent to the sender, and all resources can be freed.
 //
-// Multiple goroutines may invoke methods on a PacketRequestSender simultaneously.
+// Multiple goroutines can simultaneously invoke methods on a PacketRequestSender.
 type PacketRequestSender interface {
 	// WriteTo sends a UDP request packet to the [PacketProxy]. The packet is destined for the remote server identified
-	// by `destination`; and the payload of the packet is stored in `p`. If `p` is empty, the request packet will be
+	// by `destination` and the payload of the packet is stored in `p`. If `p` is empty, the request packet will be
 	// ignored. WriteTo returns the number of bytes written from `p` and any error encountered that caused the function
 	// to stop early.
 	//
@@ -53,13 +53,13 @@ type PacketRequestSender interface {
 	Close() error
 }
 
-// PacketResponseReceiver receives UDP response packets from the [PacketProxy]. It is usually implemented by the
-// upstream component (such as a network stack). When creating a new UDP session, a valid instance
-// PacketResponseReceiver is passed to the PacketProxy.NewSession function. Then the [PacketProxy] must use this
-// instance to send UDP responses all the time; and it must call the Close function to indicate there will be no more
-// responses send to this receiver.
+// PacketResponseReceiver receives UDP response packets from the [PacketProxy]. It is usually implemented by an
+// upstream component (such as a network stack). When a new UDP session is created, a valid instance of
+// PacketResponseReceiver is passed to the PacketProxy.NewSession function. The [PacketProxy] must then use this
+// instance to send UDP responses. It must then call the Close function to indicate that there will be no more
+// responses sent to this receiver.
 //
-// Multiple goroutines may invoke methods on a PacketResponseReceiver simultaneously.
+// Multiple goroutines can simultaneously invoke methods on a PacketResponseReceiver.
 type PacketResponseReceiver interface {
 	// WriteFrom is a callback function that is called by a PacketProxy when a UDP response packet is received. The
 	// `source` identifies the remote server that sent the packet; and the `p` contains the packet payload. WriteFrom

transport/address.go

@@ -35,12 +35,12 @@ func (a *domainAddr) String() string {
 var _ net.Addr = (*domainAddr)(nil)
 
 // MakeNetAddr returns a [net.Addr] based on the network and address.
-// This is a helper for code that need to return or provide a net.Addr
-// The address must be in host:port format, with the host being a domain name, IPv4 or IPv6.
-// Network must be "tcp" or "udp".
+// This is a helper for code that needs to return or provide a [net.Addr].
+// The address must be in "host:port" format with the host being a domain name, IPv4 or IPv6.
+// The network must be "tcp" or "udp".
 // For IP hosts, the returned address will be of type [*net.TCPAddr] or [*net.UDPAddr], based on the network argument.
-// This is important because some of the standard library functions inspect the type of the address and may return an
-// "invalid argument" error if the type is not the right one.
+// This is important because some of the standard library functions inspect the type of the address and might return an
+// "invalid argument" error if the type is not the correct one.
 func MakeNetAddr(network, address string) (net.Addr, error) {
 	host, port, err := net.SplitHostPort(address)
 	if err != nil {

transport/packet.go

@@ -26,11 +26,11 @@ type PacketEndpoint interface {
 	Connect(ctx context.Context) (net.Conn, error)
 }
 
-// UDPEndpoint is a [PacketEndpoint] that connects to the given address via UDP
+// UDPEndpoint is a [PacketEndpoint] that connects to the specified address using UDP
 type UDPEndpoint struct {
 	// The Dialer used to create the net.Conn on Connect().
 	Dialer net.Dialer
-	// The endpoint address (host:port) to pass to Dial.
+	// The endpoint address ("host:port") to pass to Dial.
 	// If the host is a domain name, consider pre-resolving it to avoid resolution calls.
 	Address string
 }
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ func (e UDPEndpoint) Connect(ctx context.Context) (net.Conn, error) {
 	return e.Dialer.DialContext(ctx, "udp", e.Address)
 }
 
-// PacketDialerEndpoint is a [PacketEndpoint] that connects to the given address using the given [PacketDialer].
+// PacketDialerEndpoint is a [PacketEndpoint] that connects to the given address using the specified [PacketDialer].
 type PacketDialerEndpoint struct {
 	Dialer  PacketDialer
 	Address string
@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@ func (e *PacketDialerEndpoint) Connect(ctx context.Context) (net.Conn, error) {
 
 // PacketDialer provides a way to dial a destination and establish datagram connections.
 type PacketDialer interface {
-	// Dial connects to `raddr`.
-	// `raddr` has the form `host:port`, where `host` can be a domain name or IP address.
+	// Dial connects to `addr`.
+	// `addr` has the form "host:port", where "host" can be a domain name or IP address.
 	Dial(ctx context.Context, addr string) (net.Conn, error)
 }
 
@@ -91,9 +91,9 @@ type boundPacketConn struct {
 var _ net.Conn = (*boundPacketConn)(nil)
 
 // Dial implements [PacketDialer].Dial.
-// The address is a host:port and the host must be a full IP address (not [::]) or a domain
-// The address must be supported by the WriteTo call of the PacketConn
-// returned by the PacketListener. For instance, a [net.UDPConn] only supports IP addresses, not domain names.
+// The address is in "host:port" format and the host must be either a full IP address (not "[::]") or a domain.
+// The address must be supported by the WriteTo call of the [net.PacketConn] returned by the [PacketListener].
+// For example, a [net.UDPConn] only supports IP addresses, not domain names.
 // If the host is a domain name, consider pre-resolving it to avoid resolution calls.
 func (e PacketListenerDialer) Dial(ctx context.Context, address string) (net.Conn, error) {
 	packetConn, err := e.Listener.ListenPacket(ctx)
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ func (c *boundPacketConn) RemoteAddr() net.Addr {
 
 // PacketListener provides a way to create a local unbound packet connection to send packets to different destinations.
 type PacketListener interface {
-	// ListenPacket creates a PacketConn that can be used to relay packets (such as UDP) through some proxy.
+	// ListenPacket creates a PacketConn that can be used to relay packets (such as UDP) through a proxy.
 	ListenPacket(ctx context.Context) (net.PacketConn, error)
 }
 

transport/stream.go

@@ -20,14 +20,13 @@ import (
 	"net"
 )
 
-// StreamConn is a net.Conn that allows for closing only the reader or writer end of
-// it, supporting half-open state.
+// StreamConn is a [net.Conn] that allows for closing only the reader or writer end of it, supporting half-open state.
 type StreamConn interface {
 	net.Conn
 	// Closes the Read end of the connection, allowing for the release of resources.
 	// No more reads should happen.
 	CloseRead() error
-	// Closes the Write end of the connection. An EOF or FIN signal may be
+	// Closes the Write end of the connection. An EOF or FIN signal can be
 	// sent to the connection target.
 	CloseWrite() error
 }
@@ -59,8 +58,8 @@ func (dc *duplexConnAdaptor) CloseWrite() error {
 	return dc.StreamConn.CloseWrite()
 }
 
-// WrapDuplexConn wraps an existing [StreamConn] with new Reader and Writer, but
-// preserving the original [StreamConn.CloseRead] and [StreamConn.CloseWrite].
+// WrapConn wraps an existing [StreamConn] with a new [io.Reader] and [io.Writer], but preserves the original
+// [StreamConn].CloseRead and [StreamConn].CloseWrite.
 func WrapConn(c StreamConn, r io.Reader, w io.Writer) StreamConn {
 	conn := c
 	// We special-case duplexConnAdaptor to avoid multiple levels of nesting.
@@ -70,13 +69,14 @@ func WrapConn(c StreamConn, r io.Reader, w io.Writer) StreamConn {
 	return &duplexConnAdaptor{StreamConn: conn, r: r, w: w}
 }
 
-// StreamEndpoint represents an endpoint that can be used to established stream connections (like TCP) to a fixed destination.
+// StreamEndpoint represents an endpoint that can be used to establish stream connections (like TCP) to a fixed
+// destination.
 type StreamEndpoint interface {
 	// Connect establishes a connection with the endpoint, returning the connection.
 	Connect(ctx context.Context) (StreamConn, error)
 }
 
-// TCPEndpoint is a [StreamEndpoint] that connects to the given address using the given [StreamDialer].
+// TCPEndpoint is a [StreamEndpoint] that connects to the specified address using the specified [StreamDialer].
 type TCPEndpoint struct {
 	// The Dialer used to create the net.Conn on Connect().
 	Dialer net.Dialer
@@ -96,7 +96,8 @@ func (e *TCPEndpoint) Connect(ctx context.Context) (StreamConn, error) {
 	return conn.(*net.TCPConn), nil
 }
 
-// StreamDialerEndpoint is a [StreamEndpoint] that connects to the given address using the given [StreamDialer].
+// StreamDialerEndpoint is a [StreamEndpoint] that connects to the specified address using the specified
+// [StreamDialer].
 type StreamDialerEndpoint struct {
 	Dialer  StreamDialer
 	Address string
@@ -112,7 +113,7 @@ func (e *StreamDialerEndpoint) Connect(ctx context.Context) (StreamConn, error)
 // StreamDialer provides a way to dial a destination and establish stream connections.
 type StreamDialer interface {
 	// Dial connects to `raddr`.
-	// `raddr` has the form `host:port`, where `host` can be a domain name or IP address.
+	// `raddr` has the form "host:port", where "host" can be a domain name or IP address.
 	Dial(ctx context.Context, raddr string) (StreamConn, error)
 }