From bb023a4bb52e6b4cb85d5199529783e4e1e69e48 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: angelinalg <122562471+angelinalg@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 9 Oct 2024 17:54:44 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] style edits

Reviewers, please correct any inaccuracies I might introduced inadvertently. Thank you.
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 templates/serve-stable-diffusion/README.ipynb | 38 +++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/serve-stable-diffusion/README.ipynb b/templates/serve-stable-diffusion/README.ipynb
index c8bb674b6..de3f93217 100644
--- a/templates/serve-stable-diffusion/README.ipynb
+++ b/templates/serve-stable-diffusion/README.ipynb
@@ -4,24 +4,24 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "# Serving a Stable Diffusion Model with Ray Serve\n",
+    "# Serving a Stable Diffusion model with Ray Serve\n",
     "\n",
     "**⏱️ Time to complete**: 5 min (15 on GCP)\n",
     "\n",
     "This template shows you how to:\n",
-    "1. Develop and run a Ray Serve application running the SDXL diffusion model.\n",
-    "2. Send test requests to the application running locally.\n",
-    "3. Deploy the application to production as a service.\n",
-    "4. Send requests to the application running in production as a service."
+    "1. Develop and run a Ray Serve app running the SDXL diffusion model.\n",
+    "2. Send test requests to the app running locally.\n",
+    "3. Deploy the app to production as a service.\n",
+    "4. Send requests to the app running in production as a service."
    ]
   },
   {
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "## Step 1: Install python dependencies\n",
+    "## Step 1: Install Python dependencies\n",
     "\n",
-    "The application requires a few extra Python dependencies. Install them using `pip` and they'll be saved in the workspace and picked up when deploying to production."
+    "The app requires a few extra Python dependencies. Install them using `pip` and Anyscale saves them in the workspace and picks them up when deploying to production."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -38,12 +38,12 @@
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
     "## Step 2: Run the model locally\n",
-    "- Run the command below in a VSCode terminal (Ctrl-`).\n",
-    "- The model will be available at http://localhost:8000.\n",
-    "- The command will block and print logs for the application.\n",
+    "- Run the command below in a VS Code terminal (Ctrl-`).\n",
+    "- The model is available at http://localhost:8000.\n",
+    "- The command blocks and prints logs for the app.\n",
     "\n",
     "```bash\n",
-    "# Run the following in a VSCode terminal because it's a blocking command.\n",
+    "# Run the following in a VS Code terminal because it's a blocking command.\n",
     "$ serve run main:stable_diffusion_app\n",
     "```"
    ]
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
     "\n",
     "The `generate_image` function sends an HTTP request to the model and saves the response as a local image.\n",
     "\n",
-    "As the request to generate the image runs, logs will be printed to the terminal that is running `serve run`."
+    "As the request to generate the image runs, Anyscale prints logs to the terminal that's running `serve run`."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@
     "\n",
     "Deploy the model to production using the `anyscale service deploy` command.\n",
     "\n",
-    "This creates a long-running [service](https://docs.anyscale.com/services/get-started) with a stable endpoint to query the application.\n",
+    "This command creates a long-running [service](https://docs.anyscale.com/services/get-started) with a stable endpoint to query the app.\n",
     "\n",
-    "Local files and dependencies installed in the workspace are automatically included when the service is deployed."
+    "Local files and dependencies that you install in the workspace are automatically included when the service is deployed."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
     "1. Update the `HOST` to the service endpoint.\n",
     "2. Add the authorization token as a header in the HTTP request.\n",
     "\n",
-    "Both of these values are printed when you run `anyscale service deploy`. You can also find them on the service page. For example, if the output looks like:\n",
+    "Anyscale prints both of these values you run `anyscale service deploy`. You can also find them on the service page. For example, if the output looks like:\n",
     "```bash\n",
     "(anyscale +4.0s) You can query the service endpoint using the curl request below:\n",
     "(anyscale +4.0s) curl -H 'Authorization: Bearer 26hTWi2kZwEz0Tdi1_CKRep4NLXbuuaSTDb3WMXK9DM' https://stable_diffusion_app-4rq8m.cld-ltw6mi8dxaebc3yf.s.anyscaleuserdata-staging.com\n",
@@ -183,10 +183,10 @@
     "## Summary\n",
     "\n",
     "This notebook:\n",
-    "- Developed and ran a model serving application locally.\n",
-    "- Sent a test request to the application locally.\n",
-    "- Deployed the application to production as a service.\n",
-    "- Sent another test request to the application running as a service."
+    "- Developed and ran a model serving app locally.\n",
+    "- Sent a test request to the app locally.\n",
+    "- Deployed the app to production as a service.\n",
+    "- Sent another test request to the app running as a service."
    ]
   },
   {