From f8f84afac826598bbbfcad3423b199ac7ad65aa2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mark Walker <mark@marksweb.co.uk>
Date: Thu, 24 Oct 2024 01:18:13 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] fix: Addressing review comments

---
 djangoproject/templates/base_community.html   | 23 ++++++++-----------
 .../templates/diversity/changes.html          |  2 +-
 djangoproject/templates/overview.html         |  7 +++++-
 djangoproject/templates/start.html            | 12 +++++++---
 4 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/djangoproject/templates/base_community.html b/djangoproject/templates/base_community.html
index 500e9f335..294bc92eb 100644
--- a/djangoproject/templates/base_community.html
+++ b/djangoproject/templates/base_community.html
@@ -9,19 +9,16 @@
 
 {% block header %}
   <h1 class="visuallyhidden">{% translate "Community" %}</h1>
-  {% spaceless %}
-    <p>
-      {% if community_stats.age %}
-        {% blocktranslate with age=community_stats.age %}
-          Building the <em>Django</em> Community for <em>{{ age }}</em>.
-        {% endblocktranslate %}
-      {% else %}
-        {% translate "Building the <em>Django</em> Community." %}
-      {% endif %}
-      {% translate "Come join us!" %}
-    </p>
-  {% endif %}. {% translate "Come join us!" %}</p>
-{% endspaceless %}
+  <p>
+    {% if community_stats.age %}
+      {% blocktranslate trimmed with age=community_stats.age %}
+        Building the <em>Django</em> Community for <em>{{ age }}</em>.
+      {% endblocktranslate %}
+    {% else %}
+      {% translate "Building the <em>Django</em> Community." %}
+    {% endif %}
+    {% translate "Come join us!" %}
+  </p>
 {% endblock %}
 
 {% block content-related %}
diff --git a/djangoproject/templates/diversity/changes.html b/djangoproject/templates/diversity/changes.html
index 88c732bee..b9d1ba206 100644
--- a/djangoproject/templates/diversity/changes.html
+++ b/djangoproject/templates/diversity/changes.html
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ <h2>{% translate "Change control process" %}</h2>
   <h2>{% translate "Changelog" %}</h2>
 
   <dl>
-    <dt>Jun 16, 2015</dt>
+    <dt>{% translate "June" %} 16, 2015</dt>
     <dd><a href="https://github.com/django/djangoproject.com/commit/da5f784cf737c6d74c1233c3db3442732fd87d6d">
       {% translate "Initial release" %}</a>.</dd>
   </dl>
diff --git a/djangoproject/templates/overview.html b/djangoproject/templates/overview.html
index 0efa18165..a603004f9 100644
--- a/djangoproject/templates/overview.html
+++ b/djangoproject/templates/overview.html
@@ -61,7 +61,12 @@ <h1>{% translate "Why Django?" %}</h1>
 
     <dt class="even"><i class="icon icon-dashboard"></i> {% translate "Exceedingly scalable." %}</dt>
     <dd class="even">
-      <p>Some of the busiest sites on the planet use Django’s ability to quickly and flexibly scale to meet the heaviest traffic demands.</p>
+      <p>
+        {% blocktranslate trimmed %}
+          Some of the busiest sites on the planet use Django’s ability to quickly and flexibly scale to meet the
+          heaviest traffic demands.
+        {% endblocktranslate %}
+      </p>
       <a class="link-readmore" href="{% url 'document-detail' lang='en' version='stable' url='faq/general' host 'docs' %}#does-django-scale">{% translate "Learn more about scaling Django applications" %}</a>
     </dd>
 
diff --git a/djangoproject/templates/start.html b/djangoproject/templates/start.html
index 43d165d50..977a30586 100644
--- a/djangoproject/templates/start.html
+++ b/djangoproject/templates/start.html
@@ -245,10 +245,16 @@ <h2>{% translate "Authentication" %}</h2>
           </div>
         </li>
         <li>
-          <h2>Admin</h2>
+          <h2>{% translate "Admin" %}</h2>
           <div class="collapsing-content">
-            <p>One of the most powerful parts of Django is its automatic admin interface. It reads metadata in your models to provide a powerful and production-ready interface that content producers can immediately use to start managing content on your site. It’s easy to set up and provides many hooks for customization.</p>
-            <a class="link-readmore" href="{% url 'document-detail' lang='en' version='stable' url='ref/contrib/admin' host 'docs' %}">Read more</a>
+            <p>
+              {% blocktranslate trimmed %}
+                One of the most powerful parts of Django is its automatic admin interface. It reads metadata in your
+                models to provide a powerful and production-ready interface that content producers can immediately
+                use to start managing content on your site. It’s easy to set up and provides many hooks for customization.
+              {% endblocktranslate %}
+            </p>
+            <a class="link-readmore" href="{% url 'document-detail' lang='en' version='stable' url='ref/contrib/admin' host 'docs' %}">{% translate "Read more" %}</a>
         {# fmt:off #}
         {% pygment 'python' %}
 from bands.models import Band, Member