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         <br><h1>Hominiter - Initiating Profound <strong>Immersion</strong></h1><br><br>
 
-<p>Greetings! Step into my world of knowledge and curiosity where you can explore the fascinating realm of bionics science. Here, you can find posts written by me across four main themes: historical insights, notable figures, findings, and miscellaneous discoveries. May you find your "immersion" and unravel new perspectives here!
+<p>Step into my world of knowledge and curiosity where you can explore the fascinating realm of bionics science! Here, you can find posts written by me across four main themes: historical insights, notable figures, findings, and miscellaneous discoveries. May you find your "immersion" and unravel new perspectives here!
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 <h1>About me</h1><br><br>
 <p>Hey folks, it's Dang at the helm of this blog. My name is Vu Minh Dang. I am currently attending High School for the Gifted based in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam. With a keen passion for science and its history, I'm eager to share my knowledge, insights and enthusiasm through this blog as well as inspire the boffin inside you!</p><br>
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 <h1>Why this weird font?</h1><br><br>
 
-<p>This is Bionic Reading. The idea is your eyes focus on the bolded part of the word and your brain completes the rest. Your brain can read faster than your eyes, so by essentially reducing the number of letters your eye needs to look at, you can read faster while still retaining the full context. Bionic Reading can help people with ADD and ADHD focus more easily on what they're reading by making the font more visually stimulating. 
+<p>This is Bionic Reading. The idea is your eyes focus on the bolded part of the word and your brain completes the rest. Your brain can read faster than your eyes, so by essentially reducing the number of letters your eye needs to look at, you can read faster while still retaining the full context. Bionic Reading can also help people with ADD and ADHD focus more easily on what they're reading by making the font more visually stimulating. 
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