Reword lottery to be a bit more explicit

templates/schedule/event_tickets_about.html

@@ -5,16 +5,19 @@
 
 <h2>Workshop sign-up</h2>
 
-<p>Workshops at EMF are always extremely oversubscribed. To make (youth)workshops
-  more equitable as well as preventing long queues, we're introducing an online
-  sign up system for most workshops.</p>
+<p>Workshops (and youth workshops) at EMF are always extremely oversubscribed.
+  To make things more equitable, and prevent long queues at the same time, we're
+  introducing{# 2024 #} an online sign-up system for most workshops.</p>
 
-<p>The majority of workshop places will be allocated via a lottery, which you can
-  enter and win tickets for one workshop in advance. For most workshops, any
-  remaining or returned tickets will be made available online on a first-come,
-  first-served basis before the workshop is due to take place. Remaining places
-  for youth workshops will be allocated at the Youth Workshop tent on a first-come,
-  first-served basis 15 minutes before the workshop start time.</p>
+<p>The majority of workshop places will be allocated via a lottery which takes
+  place in advance. You can enter and win tickets for one workshop and one youth
+  workshop. When each lottery runs, you will receive the total number of places you
+  requested, or none.</p>
+
+<p>Any remaining or returned tickets will typically be made available online on a
+  first-come, first-served basis before the workshop is due to take place.
+  Remaining places for youth workshops will be allocated at the Youth Workshop tent
+  on a first-come, first-served basis 15 minutes before the workshop start time.</p>
 
 <p>To enter the workshop lottery:</p>
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@@ -37,20 +40,17 @@ <h2>Workshop sign-up</h2>
 <p>On Wednesday 29th May lottery places will be allocated. The lottery will be
   closed from this point onwards.</p>
 
-<p>You can only win places for one workshop. You will get sent a code for this,
-  which you will be asked for by the workshop stewards to gain entrance to your
-  allocated workshop, or you can provide your name. You can share your code(s)
-  with others, but only one person will be admitted per code.</p>
-
-<p>Any other workshop lotteries you entered will appear as 'cancelled' on the
-  workshop tickets page.</p>
+<p>If you've won, bring your code to the workshop, and show it to the workshop
+  stewards. They will also be able to confirm your place by name if necessary.
+  You can pass your code onto someone else, but only one person will be
+  admitted per code.</p>
 
-<p>You can still sign up for tickets for other workshops. These tickets will be
-  available once the event starts on a first-come first-served basis but there
-  won't be as many.</p>
+<p>After your place is confirmed, you can still sign up for tickets for other
+  workshops. These tickets will be available once the event starts on a first-come
+  first-served basis, but there won't be as many.</p>
 
-<p>Workshops provided by Villages will not be using this system, and how you can
-  attend these workshops will be decided by each individual village. The best
-  idea is to visit the village early and ask them.</p>
+<p>Workshops provided by villages will not be using this system, and it is up to
+  each village to decide how attendance works. Look out for communications from
+  villages, or visit them early on to find out more.</p>
 
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