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docs/functionality.rst

@@ -350,19 +350,19 @@ You can find detailed information about what and how data is collected below.
 
 What:
 
-1. **Number of endpoints:** We collect the amount of endpoints, no names or anything that could expose your application.
+1. **Number of endpoints:** The amount of endpoints, no names or anything that could expose your application.
 
-2. **Number of blueprints:** We collect the amount of blueprints, again - only the number.
+2. **Number of blueprints:** The amount of blueprints, again - only the number.
 
 3. **Aggregated monitoring levels:** To determine the most frequently utilized monitoring level, we aggregate the levels set from each endpoint.
 
 4. **Table size:** In order to determine how fast the data accumulates, we collect the size of the database and its tables.
 
-5. **Route visits:** We collect which routes you use in the dashboard.
+5. **Route visits:** Which routes you use in the dashboard.
 
 How:
 
-We post the data anonymously to a remote server. This way we can monitor which functionalities are being used the most, and which functionalities are not being used at all. We are a small research team and this way we can focus our efforts on what actually matters.
+Anonymized data is sent to a remote server. This way we can monitor which functionalities are being used the most, and which functionalities are not being used at all. We are a small research team and this way we can focus our efforts on what actually matters.
 This is most of the logic behind the telemetry:
 
 .. code-block:: python