feat : further Figma copy updates

guardian · Oct 25, 2024 · ca3c13c · ca3c13c
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diff --git a/support-frontend/assets/components/offer/offer.tsx b/support-frontend/assets/components/offer/offer.tsx
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ export function OfferFeast(): JSX.Element {
 	return (
 		<div css={containerStyle}>
 			<p css={paragraphStyle}>
-				Unlimited access to the Guardian Feast App{' '}
+				Unlimited access to the Guardian Feast app{' '}
 				<span css={tooltipOfferStyle}>
 					<Tooltip
 						children={

diff --git a/support-frontend/assets/components/thankYou/thankYouModuleData.tsx b/support-frontend/assets/components/thankYou/thankYouModuleData.tsx
@@ -226,13 +226,12 @@ export const getThankYouModuleData = (
 		},
 		newspaperArchiveBenefit: {
 			icon: getThankYouModuleIcon('newspaperArchiveBenefit'),
-			header: 'The Guardian newspapers archive',
+			header: 'The Guardian newspaper archive',
 			bodyCopy: (
 				<>
 					Sign in to start exploring more than 200 years of world history with
 					our newspaper archive. View digital reproductions of every front page,
-					article and advertisement as it was printed in the
-					{countryGroupId === 'GBPCountries' ? ' Guardian' : ' UK,'} from 1821
+					article and advertisement as it was printed in the Guardian from 1821.
 				</>
 			),
 			ctas: null,

diff --git a/support-frontend/assets/helpers/productCatalog.tsx b/support-frontend/assets/helpers/productCatalog.tsx
@@ -344,39 +344,36 @@ export const productCatalogDescription: Record<ProductKey, ProductDescription> =
 		},
 	};
 
-export function productCatalogDescriptionNewBenefits(
-	countryGroupId: CountryGroupId,
-): Record<ProductKey, ProductDescription> {
-	return {
-		...productCatalogDescription,
-		TierThree: {
-			...productCatalogDescription.TierThree,
-			benefits: [
-				...productCatalogDescription.TierThree.benefits,
-				{
-					copy: `Unlimited access to the Guardian's 200-year newspaper archive`,
-					isNew: true,
-					tooltip: `Look back on more than 200 years of world history with the Guardian newspaper archive. Get digital access to every front page, article and advertisement, as it was printed ${
-						countryGroupId === 'GBPCountries' ? '' : ' in the UK'
-					}, since 1821.`,
-				},
-			],
-		},
-		SupporterPlus: {
-			...productCatalogDescription.SupporterPlus,
-			benefits: [
-				...productCatalogDescription.SupporterPlus.benefits,
-				{
-					copy: 'Unlimited access to the Guardian Feast app',
-					isNew: true,
-					tooltip:
-						'Make a feast out of anything with the Guardian’s new recipe app. Feast has thousands of recipes including quick and budget-friendly weeknight dinners, and showstopping weekend dishes – plus smart app features to make mealtimes inspiring.',
-				},
-			],
-			offers: [],
-		},
-	};
-}
+export const productCatalogDescriptionNewBenefits: Record<
+	ProductKey,
+	ProductDescription
+> = {
+	...productCatalogDescription,
+	TierThree: {
+		...productCatalogDescription.TierThree,
+		benefits: [
+			...productCatalogDescription.TierThree.benefits,
+			{
+				copy: `Unlimited access to the Guardian's 200-year newspaper archive`,
+				isNew: true,
+				tooltip: `Look back on more than 200 years of world history with the Guardian archive. Get digital access to every front page, article and advertisement printed in the newspaper from 1981.`,
+			},
+		],
+	},
+	SupporterPlus: {
+		...productCatalogDescription.SupporterPlus,
+		benefits: [
+			...productCatalogDescription.SupporterPlus.benefits,
+			{
+				copy: 'Unlimited access to the Guardian Feast app',
+				isNew: true,
+				tooltip:
+					'Make a feast out of anything with the Guardian’s new recipe app. Feast has thousands of recipes including quick and budget-friendly weeknight dinners, and showstopping weekend dishes – plus smart app features to make mealtimes inspiring.',
+			},
+		],
+		offers: [],
+	},
+};
 
 /**
  * This method is to help us determine which product and rateplan to

diff --git a/support-frontend/assets/pages/[countryGroupId]/checkout.tsx b/support-frontend/assets/pages/[countryGroupId]/checkout.tsx
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ function CheckoutComponent({
 	const supportAbTests = getSupportAbTests(abParticipations);
 
 	const productDescription = abParticipations.newspaperArchiveBenefit
-		? productCatalogDescriptionNewBenefits(countryGroupId)[productKey]
+		? productCatalogDescriptionNewBenefits[productKey]
 		: productCatalogDescription[productKey];
 	const ratePlanDescription = productDescription.ratePlans[ratePlanKey];
 

diff --git a/support-frontend/assets/pages/supporter-plus-landing/components/newspaperArchiveBanner.tsx b/support-frontend/assets/pages/supporter-plus-landing/components/newspaperArchiveBanner.tsx
@@ -87,9 +87,9 @@ export function NewspaperArchiveBanner() {
 					</span>
 				</h2>
 				<p css={paragraph}>
-					Since 1821, the world’s major events have been documented in the pages
-					of the Guardian’s UK newspaper. Today, you can journey through the
-					archive and search records of world history from wherever you are
+					Since 1821, the world's major events have been documented in the pages
+					of the Guardian. Today, you can search through and view that record of
+					history with access to the Guardian archives.
 				</p>
 			</div>
 			<Hide from="desktop">

diff --git a/support-frontend/assets/pages/supporter-plus-landing/twoStepPages/threeTierLanding.tsx b/support-frontend/assets/pages/supporter-plus-landing/twoStepPages/threeTierLanding.tsx
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ export function ThreeTierLanding({
 	const productCatalogDescription = ['v1', 'v2'].includes(
 		abParticipations.newspaperArchiveBenefit ?? '',
 	)
-		? productCatalogDescriptionNewBenefits(countryGroupId)
+		? productCatalogDescriptionNewBenefits
 		: canonicalProductCatalogDescription;
 
 	/**