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-This document outlines the utilization of the Transmission Control Protocol - Authentication Option (TCP-AO), as prescribed in RFC 5295, for the authentication of Border Gateway Protocol Monitoring Protocol (BMP) sessions, as specified in RFC 7854. The intent is to heighten security within the underlying Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) transport layer, ensuring the authentication of BMP sessions conducted between routers and BMP stations.
+This document outlines the utilization of the Transmission Control Protocol - Authentication Option (TCP-AO), as prescribed in RFC5295, for the authentication of Border Gateway Protocol Monitoring Protocol (BMP) sessions, as specified in RFC7854. The intent is to heighten security within the underlying Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) transport layer, ensuring the authentication of BMP sessions conducted between routers and BMP stations.
 
 
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 # Introduction
 
-The BGP Monitoring Protocol (BMP), as specified in RFC 7854, recommends employing Internet Protocol Security (IPSec) from RFC 4303 to mitigate security concerns related to the Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) session between routers and the BMP station managing BGP route collection. Recognizing the practical limitations of IPSec, this document underscores the preference for the use of Transmission Control Protocol - Authentication Option (TCP-AO) as the authentication method of choice for TCP-based network protocols such as BGP and LDP. A comprehensive discussion of TCP-AO is provided in RFC 5295.
+The BGP Monitoring Protocol (BMP), as specified in RFC7854, recommends employing Internet Protocol Security (IPSec) from RFC4303 to mitigate security concerns related to the Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) session between routers and the BMP station managing BGP route collection. Recognizing the practical limitations of IPSec, this document underscores the preference for the use of Transmission Control Protocol - Authentication Option (TCP-AO) as the authentication method of choice for TCP-based network protocols such as BGP and LDP. A comprehensive discussion of TCP-AO is provided in RFC5295.
 
 # TCP-AO Protection for BGP Monitoring Protocol (BMP)
 
-The BGP Monitoring Protocol (BMP) outlined in RFC 7854 plays a crucial role in network management by allowing routers to share information about their BGP tables, helping operators monitor and troubleshoot their networks effectively. However, the security considerations associated with BMP have become increasingly critical in light of evolving cyber threats. This document addresses these concerns by introducing a framework that utilizes the Transmission Control Protocol - Authentication Option (TCP-AO), specified in RFC 5295, to safeguard BMP sessions.
+The BGP Monitoring Protocol (BMP) outlined in RFC7854 plays a crucial role in network management by allowing routers to share information about their BGP tables, helping operators monitor and troubleshoot their networks effectively. However, the security considerations associated with BMP have become increasingly critical in light of evolving cyber threats. This document addresses these concerns by introducing a framework that utilizes the Transmission Control Protocol - Authentication Option (TCP-AO), specified in RFC5295, to safeguard BMP sessions.
 
 Extending this security measure to BMP helps mitigate risks associated with unauthorized access, tampering, and other potential security vulnerabilities. By integrating TCP-AO into BMP implementations, network operators can establish a more resilient and trustworthy foundation for BGP monitoring activities.