Tickets/sitcom 1444

[Kelks19]

I have migrated the procedure to Obs-Ops. I have also corrected a bit of English and the flow while keeping teh content exactly same.
There is several important things I identified as missing from the content ---

1. Please note that there are two figures missing-- I think we need to create a follow-up ticket to add them once we get access to OSS activity from the TMA EUI
2. We need to highlight again how to access to TMA EUI and include link to the relevant page
3. The confluence page says that Safety Team should be included as authors. Can you specifiy which ones ?

I was not involved in the content creation and the review of the original Confluence page.

[isotuela]

Thank you! It looks good. I have added some suggestions, mostly regarding the caption in figures and the position of the LOTO box note. I think if each step's key words is in bold, it would improve reading, just like in step 2 of Applying LOTO on OSS.
Also, please squash commits into a single one. Let me know if you need any help!
Thank you!

[Slimleashma]

Thank you for the new photos and explicit instructions about the LOTO boxes. One note to make (and maybe there is hesitance to make this official) is that during the night, only ONE pump needs to be locked to consider the TMA fully under LOTO. This is helpful when one cannot find the LOTO boxes or there aren't multiple people around to move this process faster. It's something to note that LOTO at night with multiple locks and keys raises a risk of leaving lights on longer and losing these multiples. Can we consider this additional caveat for the document?

[Kelks19]

@Slimleashma I can add a note box with 'LOTO at night ' to highlight these caveats -- What do you think ?
This note can be convereted to sub-section after we confirm the official word on it.

[Slimleashma]

That could be good. Multiple locks is overkill when we are talking about a two-person operation at night. Alysha

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[Kelks19]

@Slimleashma @isotuela- I added a note about "LOTO at night". Could you please check if it reads ok?

[isotuela]

Only one minor grammar comment. Could you please squash your commits into one? Let me know if you encounter any issue.

Thanks!
Ioana

[Slimleashma]

Looks great! Thanks for the nighttime caveat.

[Kelks19]

@isotuela formatting corrected and commits squashed!

[isotuela]

All good and ready to merge.
Thanks!