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-Last year, 27th August at 0145 JST, Tachan was born. It's 26th August today and time is 2351 JST and he is fast asleep by my side<!-- truncate --> as I'm writing this. He looks more cute and adorable while sleeping and I've to put all my strenth resisting myself not to hug him tightly and shower him with kisses.
+Last year, on 27th August at 01:45 JST, Tachan was born. It's 26th August today, and the time is 23:51 JST. He is fast asleep by my side<!-- truncate --> as I write this. He looks even more cute and adorable while sleeping, and I have to summon all my strength to resist hugging him tightly and showering him with kisses.
 
-About 90 minutes before, we celebrated his first birthday. Nothing fancy. Just three of us. Kochan didn't join. We didn't have any plans for celebration today as the birthday party is on 31st (weekend), but somehow we still bought a small cake and couldn't resist ourselves.
+About 90 minutes ago, we celebrated his first birthday. Nothing fancy — just the three of us. Kochan didn’t join. We didn’t have any plans to celebrate today since the birthday party is on the 31st (weekend), but somehow we still ended up buying a small cake and couldn’t resist celebrating.
 
 He was overjoyed looking at the candle and enjoyed the Happy Birthday song a lot.
 ![first time candle fire](./assets/20240826-bday-1.jpg)
 
 Once the candle went out, he was shocked and surprised but started giggling again.
 ![mm-ma's love](./assets/20240826-bday-2.jpg)
 
-Thank you Mahadev to bless us with such a wonderful gift. Thank you always.
+Thank you, Mahadev, for blessing us with such a wonderful gift. Thank you always.
 
-Thank you Tachan for choosing us to be your parents. Big Love, Papa.
+Thank you, Tachan, for choosing us to be your parents. Big love - Papa.