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src/blog/2024-09-29-transformer-alpha.md

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ In this alpha stage, we recommend to experiment these features to significantly
 
 ### [`oxc-transform`](https://www.npmjs.com/package/oxc-transform) npm package
 
-vue.js is [experimenting](https://github.com/vuejs/core/blob/0895b2624b707ea1e75c41f2e1f75388e7a6f101/scripts/build-types.js#L20) with isolated declarations in their build pipeline.
+Vue.js is [experimenting](https://github.com/vuejs/core/blob/0895b2624b707ea1e75c41f2e1f75388e7a6f101/scripts/build-types.js#L20) with isolated declarations in their build pipeline.
 
 ```javascript
 import { isolatedDeclaration } from "oxc-transform";
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ const dts = isolatedDeclaration(filename, ts);
 [@lukeed](https://github.com/lukeed) and [@maraisr](https://github.com/maraisr) are utilizing `oxc-transform`
 for their packages
 [`empathic`](https://github.com/lukeed/empathic) and [`dldr`](https://github.com/maraisr/dldr)
-to transform and generate dts [in a single step](https://github.com/lukeed/empathic/blob/b83a360ff55051590dec19aa913cd12da97fa3f8/scripts/build.ts#L45-L52).
+to transform and generate `.d.ts` [in a single step](https://github.com/lukeed/empathic/blob/b83a360ff55051590dec19aa913cd12da97fa3f8/scripts/build.ts#L45-L52).
 
 The following example demonstrates emitting `.js` and `.d.ts` in a single transformation step:
 
@@ -61,25 +61,25 @@ await fs.writeFile("out.d.ts", transformed.declaration);
 
 [@sxzz](https://github.com/sxzz) [reports](https://x.com/sanxiaozhizi/status/1821320327231893600) their `.d.ts` generation time is reduced from 76s to 16s.
 
-### Bazel Build at [Airtable](https://github.com/Airtable)
+### Bazel build at [Airtable](https://github.com/Airtable)
 
 [@michaelm](https://github.com/MichaelMitchell-at) from [Airtable](https://github.com/Airtable)
-is integrating oxc's isolated declarations dts emit in their CI pipeline within their [bazel build](https://github.com/aspect-build/rules_ts/pull/697).
+is integrating Oxc's isolated declarations `.d.ts` emit in their CI pipeline within their [Bazel build](https://github.com/aspect-build/rules_ts/pull/697).
 
 ### Rust [`oxc_transformer`](https://crates.io/crates/oxc_transformer) crate
 
-The [Rolldown](https://rolldown.rs) bundler uses the `oxc_transformer` crate [directly](https://github.com/rolldown/rolldown/blob/3213e8fdb9e25f29295b6ec0d92fcc2ce03ce396/crates/rolldown/src/utils/pre_process_ecma_ast.rs#L67-L75).
+[Rolldown](https://rolldown.rs) bundler uses the `oxc_transformer` Rust crate [directly](https://github.com/rolldown/rolldown/blob/3213e8fdb9e25f29295b6ec0d92fcc2ce03ce396/crates/rolldown/src/utils/pre_process_ecma_ast.rs#L67-L75).
 
 ## [Benchmark Results](https://github.com/oxc-project/bench-transformer)
 
 On [GitHub Actions ubuntu-latest](https://github.com/oxc-project/bench-transformer/actions/workflows/ci.yml):
 
 Using the following files:
 
-- [cal.com - UserSettings.tsx](https://github.com/calcom/cal.com/blob/20729b3a4e62c52f49419d2c3b30225f0c7a5936/apps/web/components/getting-started/steps-views/UserSettings.tsx) - a typical 124 lines of tsx code.
-- [TypeScript - parser.ts](https://github.com/microsoft/TypeScript/blob/3ad0f752482f5e846dc35a69572ccb43311826c0/src/compiler/parser.ts) - an atypical large file with 10777 lines.
-- [vuejs - renderer.ts](https://github.com/vuejs/core/blob/cb34b28a4a9bf868be4785b001c526163eda342e/packages/runtime-core/src/renderer.ts) - a large library file with 2550 lines.
-- [AFFiNE - table.tsx](https://github.com/toeverything/AFFiNE/blob/a9b29d24f1f6e5563e43a11b5cbcfb30c9981d25/packages/frontend/core/src/components/affine/page-properties/table.tsx) - a tsx file with 1118 lines.
+- [cal.com - UserSettings.tsx](https://github.com/calcom/cal.com/blob/20729b3a4e62c52f49419d2c3b30225f0c7a5936/apps/web/components/getting-started/steps-views/UserSettings.tsx) - typical TSX file with 124 lines of code.
+- [TypeScript - parser.ts](https://github.com/microsoft/TypeScript/blob/3ad0f752482f5e846dc35a69572ccb43311826c0/src/compiler/parser.ts) - an atypically large TS file with 10777 lines.
+- [Vue.js - renderer.ts](https://github.com/vuejs/core/blob/cb34b28a4a9bf868be4785b001c526163eda342e/packages/runtime-core/src/renderer.ts) - a large library file with 2550 lines.
+- [AFFiNE - table.tsx](https://github.com/toeverything/AFFiNE/blob/a9b29d24f1f6e5563e43a11b5cbcfb30c9981d25/packages/frontend/core/src/components/affine/page-properties/table.tsx) - TSX file with 1118 lines.
 
 ### Transform
 
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ oxc > table.tsx (1.0 ms)
   59.54x faster than babel (58.5 ms)
 ```
 
-Oxc is 4x faster than swc, and 40x faster than Babel.
+Oxc is 4x faster than SWC, and 40x faster than Babel.
 
 ### Isolated Declarations
 
@@ -119,11 +119,11 @@ oxc > table.tsx (1.7 ms)
   7.24x faster than tsc (22.0 ms)
 ```
 
-Compared to tsc, oxc is 45x faster on small files, and 20x faster on larger files.
+Compared to `tsc`, Oxc is 45x faster on small files, 20x faster on larger files.
 
 ## Package size
 
-For package download size, oxc downloads two packages for a total of 2MB.
+Oxc downloads only 2 npm packages, a total of 2 MB.
 
 | Package                                                                                  | Size                                                                                        |
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@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ For package download size, oxc downloads two packages for a total of 2MB.
 
 Oxc uses less memory.
 
-On `parser.ts` (10777 lines) by using `/usr/bin/time -alh node`:
+Memory usage transforming `parser.ts` (10777 lines) - measured using `/usr/bin/time -alh node`:
 
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