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 ## Highlights
 
 ### Tools
-- Iceberg (the git client/vcs control tool) has received a lot of tweaks and fixes to work better with github and other remote control files.
-- The debugger now incorporates a lot tweaks and notably the capability of adding bindings in the context interation model.
-- TimeProfiler (the profiling tool) has a new UI, and incorporates also the alternative Andreas Profiler.
-- DrTests (the Test Runner alternative) has been updated to latest Spec and make usable again.
-- The is a new new implementation of rewrite tools 
-- There is a new tool: The Document Browser, which allow the visualisation of microdown (markdown compatible) documents placed on the web or locally. 
-- Calypso (the System Browser) has incorporated some interesting mini tools: package dependency and baseline visualisation.
-- New and improved Inspectors, notably for AST/Blocks/IR but also a lot others.
-- All versions of NewTools, Spec, Roassal and Microdown have been updated with a lot of bugfixes. 
+- Iceberg (the Git client/VCS control tool) has received a lot of tweaks and fixes to work better with GitHub and other remote control files.
+- The debugger now incorporates a lot of tweaks and, notably, the capability of adding bindings in the context interaction model.
+- TimeProfiler (the profiling tool) has a new UI and also incorporates the alternative Andreas Profiler.
+- DrTests (the Test Runner alternative) has been improved and updated to the latest Spec.
+- There is a new implementation of Rewrite tools. 
+- There is a new tool: The Document Browser, which allows the visualization of Microdown (Markdown compatible) documents placed on the web or locally. 
+- Calypso (the System Browser) has incorporated some interesting mini tools: package dependency and baseline visualization.
+- We have introduced new and improved Inspectors, notably for AST/Blocks/IR, among others.
+- All versions of NewTools, Spec, Roassal and Microdown have been updated with a lot of bug fixes. 
 
 ### System 
-- Slots now have a Setting for unrestricted definitions 
-- Slots now allow more complex Slot defininions (cascade)
-- Compiler support for full blocks without outer context
-- enable optionInlineTimesRepeat and optionInlineRepeat by default
-- Adding an API in OCBytecodeToASTCache, RBMethodNode and RBBlockNode to map AST nodes to a pc range
-- add a "parse plugin" mechanism to OpalCompiler
-- Improve faulty parsing
-- lots of bugfixes and cleanups
+- Slots now have a Setting for unrestricted definitions.
+- Slots now allow more complex Slot definitions (cascade).
+- Compiler support for full blocks without outer context.
+- We have enabled optionInlineTimesRepeat and optionInlineRepeat by default.
+- Adding an API in OCBytecodeToASTCache, RBMethodNode and RBBlockNode to map AST nodes to a PC range.
+- Add a "parse plugin" mechanism to OpalCompiler.
+- Improve faulty parsing.
+- A Lots of bug fixes and cleanups.
 - Constant Block Closures are created at compile time (speeds up both creating and evaluation of [#blockslikethis])
-- Support for ephemerons
+- Support for ephemerons.
    
 ### Virtual machine
-- Ephemerons Production Ready (large amount of ephemerons supported, leaks fixed, support for old finalization, tests).
-- Improving the Memory Map of the VM (Using constant positions)
+- Ephemerons are production ready (a large number of Ephemerons supported, leaks fixed, support for old finalization, tests).
+- Improving the Memory Map of the VM (using constant positions).
 - Initial support for Single-Instruction Multiple-Data (SIMD)
     - Initialization of new objects using SIMD (ARM64)
     - Adding Bytecode Extensions to support SIMD instructions
     - Adding Vector Registers
     - Vector Register bytecodes
-- Third-Party Dependency Update (Newer versions, Graphic Libraries using Hardware Acceleration)
+- Third-Party Dependency Update (newer versions, graphic libraries using hardware acceleration).
 - Fixing errors and simplification of primitives.
-- Clean Ups: Remove lots of old code, notably old experiments, dead code and unused code like newspeak or plugins. 
+- Clean Ups: We have removed a significant amount of old code, notably old experiments, dead code, and unused code such as Newspeak and unused plugins.
 
 ## Status
-Current Pharo development status.
+Current Pharo development status:
 1. 309 forks on GitHub
 2. 972 issues closed since Pharo 10
 3. 1412 Pull requests processed since Pharo 10, not counting separately managed projects:
@@ -125,13 +125,13 @@ Current Pharo development status.
 - [http://github.com/pharo-project/opensmalltalk-vm](http://github.com/pharo-project/opensmalltalk-vm)
 
 ## Contributors
-We always say Pharo is yours. It is yours because we made it for you, but most importantly because it is made by the invaluable contributions of our great community (yourself).  
-A large community of people from all around the world contributed to Pharo 11.0 by making pull requests, reporting bugs, participating in discussion threads, providing feedback etc., etc., etc.  
-Thank you all for your contributions.  
+We always say Pharo is yours. It is yours because we made it for you, but most importantly, because it is made by the invaluable contributions of our great community (yourself).  
+A large community of people from all around the world contributed to Pharo 11.0 by making pull requests, reporting bugs, participating in discussion threads, providing feedback and more.  
+Thank you all for your contributions!  
 
 ## Changelog
 
-The complete list of changes can be see (in *per week* basis) [here](https://github.com/pharo-project/pharo-changelogs/tree/master/weekly). '
+The complete list of changes can be viewed on a weekly basis [here](https://github.com/pharo-project/pharo-changelogs/tree/master/weekly).'
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