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10-10: Add a comma after "value" for grammatical correctness.- some users are okay retrieving the latest resource value while others require all the changes which occurred during the time their application or internal messaging system was down. + some users are okay retrieving the latest resource value, while others require all the changes which occurred during the time their application or internal messaging system was down.Tools
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12-12: Replace "Let's have a look at them." with "Let's take a look at them." to align with American English usage.- Let's have a look at them. + Let's take a look at them.Tools
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17-17: Insert "a" before "resource" to correct the grammatical error.- e.g., when the content of resource changes, when a new resource is published, or when a new device is registered with the plgd hub, + e.g., when the content of a resource changes, when a new resource is published, or when a new device is registered with the plgd hub,Tools
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42-42: Replace "as well as" with "and" to correct the grammatical error and reduce wordiness.- Described RPC call of the plgd gRPC Gateway supports both global ETag as well as ETag per resource. + Described RPC call of the plgd gRPC Gateway supports both global ETag and ETag per resource.Tools
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52-52: Replace "was not able to" with "couldn't" to enhance conciseness and fix the grammatical error related to "fallback."- plgd hub was not able to publish some events, they won't be published again and your service has to anyway fallback to reconciliation using plgd gRPC Gateway. + plgd hub couldn't publish some events, they won't be published again, and your service has to anyway fall back to reconciliation using plgd gRPC Gateway.Tools
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67-67: Change "a export" to "an export" to correct the article usage.- utilize the `mongodump` tool to create a export of the database contents, store it securely, and use it in case of failure. + utilize the `mongodump` tool to create an export of the database contents, store it securely, and use it in case of failure.Tools
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85-85: The documentation update correctly reflects the renaming fromglobal.authorizationCAPooltoglobal.extraCAPool.authorization. Ensure all references across the documentation and codebase are consistently updated.Verification successful
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615-615: Grammatical correction already suggested in previous comments.The suggested change from "This steps" to "These steps" is correct and improves the grammatical accuracy of the document.
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3-8: Add more descriptive metadata for better SEO and user guidance.The metadata fields such as
title,description,date,categories,keywords, andweighthave been added. This is a good practice as it improves SEO and helps users find relevant content more easily. However, consider enhancing the description for greater clarity and engagement.
601-603: Clarify the role of theglobal.standbyflag in disaster recovery scenarios.The note about the
global.standbyflag is useful, but it could be expanded to explain how this affects the behavior of the cluster in more detail, especially in failover scenarios.
[REFACTOR_Suggestion]+ Note: Setting the `global.standby` flag to `true` ensures that the cluster operates in a passive mode, ready to take over operations if the primary cluster fails.
82-142: Ensure consistency in certificate generation commands.The commands for generating CA certificates are consistent and use the same Docker image, which is good for maintainability. However, ensure that the
cert-toolversion used (vnext) is the stable or intended version for production environments.
292-422: Review the Helm deployment commands for accuracy and security.The Helm deployment commands are crucial for setting up the environment. It's important to ensure that these commands do not expose sensitive information and are syntactically correct. Also, verify that the
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44-55: Validate the Kubernetes version compatibility.The document specifies Kubernetes v1.24+ for the MicroK8s prerequisites. Ensure that all the listed addons are compatible with this Kubernetes version to prevent deployment issues.
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34-36: Security Recommendations for MongoDBThe recommendation to set up a firewall or use a VPN for security between clusters is crucial. However, it might be beneficial to provide specific configuration examples or best practices for these security measures.
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12-20: Explanation of CA CertificatesThe explanation of different CA certificates (
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42-55: MicroK8s Addons ConfigurationThe listing of required MicroK8s addons is clear and well-formatted. This section provides a good foundation for ensuring that all necessary services are enabled for the disaster recovery setup.
82-118: Certificate Generation CommandsThe commands for generating CA certificates are clear and correctly use Docker to handle certificate generation. This approach ensures consistency and security in handling certificates.
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146-148: Device Provisioning Service DependenciesThe instructions for handling certificates and tokens for the Device Provisioning Service are clear. However, there is a repeated phrase "This token needs to be stored" that could be varied for better readability.
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150-218: Setting Up cert-manager on the Primary ClusterThe detailed steps for setting up cert-manager, including creating secrets and cluster issuers, are well-documented and follow best practices for Kubernetes certificate management.
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3-8: Metadata fields added to the front matter are appropriate and complete.The addition of
title,description,date,categories,keywords, andweightenhances the metadata of the document, which is beneficial for SEO and user navigation.
14-16: Explanation of CA certificate pairs is clear and informative.The documentation clearly outlines the different types of CA certificates used and their specific purposes, which is crucial for understanding the security architecture.
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82-142: Certificate generation steps are comprehensive.The steps for generating different CA certificates using the
cert-toolDocker image are well-detailed. Ensure that the commands are executed with the correct user permissions and that the certificates are stored securely.
292-423: Deployment commands for plgd on the primary cluster.The Helm commands and configuration for deploying plgd on the primary cluster are detailed and robust. However, the use of hard-coded values such as
HUB_IDandOWNER_CLAIMcould be parameterized for better flexibility and security.
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634-654: Clarification needed on switching to the standby cluster.The steps for switching to the standby cluster are explained, but the use of repetitive phrases like "To do this" could be replaced with more direct language to enhance clarity and engagement.
- To do this, delete the `mongodb-standby-tool` job and upgrade the Helm chart, which will create a new job. + Begin by deleting the `mongodb-standby-tool` job, then upgrade the Helm chart to initiate a new job.Likely invalid or redundant comment.
57-62: DNS configuration steps are clear but need validation.The steps provided for configuring DNS in MicroK8s are clear. However, ensure that the IP address
192.168.1.1is correctly set up in the DNS configuration and is reachable from both clusters.
64-75: LoadBalancer IP address pool setup needs attention.The setup of the IP address pool for the LoadBalancer is critical. Ensure that the specified IP ranges
192.168.1.200-192.168.1.219and192.168.1.220-192.168.1.239do not overlap with other network devices and that they are correctly configured in the network settings.
20-20: Ensure MongoDB communication restrictions are enforced.The goal to restrict MongoDB communication between clusters while allowing plgd services to connect only to their respective cluster's MongoDB is crucial for security. Verify that these restrictions are correctly implemented in the network configuration.
42-55: Review of Kubernetes addons configuration.The configuration of Kubernetes addons such as
cert-manager,dns,helm, and others is crucial for the cluster's functionality. Ensure that these addons are compatible with the Kubernetes version and are configured correctly for both clusters.Verification successful
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22-30: Ensure consistency in DNS naming and access descriptions.The documentation clearly lists the DNS names and their purposes for both clusters, which is crucial for clarity and correct setup. However, ensure that these names are consistently used in the same way throughout the entire document to avoid any confusion.
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mongodb-[0-2].(primary|standby).plgd.cloudare consistently used and described correctly throughout the document.
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146-148: Clarify storage requirements for proprietary DPS Docker image tokens.The document mentions that a token needs to be stored securely for accessing the proprietary DPS Docker image. It's crucial to ensure that this storage path is secure and that best practices around token management are followed.
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40-55: Validate the list of required MicroK8s addons.The list of MicroK8s addons required for setting up the environment is comprehensive. However, it's crucial to ensure that all these addons are indeed necessary and that there are no additional dependencies missing from this list.
634-654: Clarify the process of switching to and from the standby cluster.The instructions for switching to the standby cluster and back are crucial for disaster recovery. Ensure that these steps are tested and verify that the commands provided work as expected in real scenarios.
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15-17: Docker pull command is correct.The command to pull the Docker image is correctly formatted and functional.
21-21: Configuration template link is correct.The link to the YAML configuration template is correctly formatted and points to the appropriate location in the repository.
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22-57: Enhance Clarity in Cluster Setup and DNS ConfigurationThe setup instructions for DNS and LoadBalancer are technically accurate but could be overwhelming for novices. Consider breaking down these sections into more detailed step-by-step instructions or including a glossary of terms to aid comprehension.
292-423: Parameterize Hardcoded Values in Deployment CommandsThe deployment commands are detailed and provide a good step-by-step guide. However, the use of hardcoded values such as
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| mkdir -p .tmp/standby/certs/internal | ||
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| --rm -v $(pwd)/.tmp/standby/certs/internal:/certs \ | ||
| --user $(id -u):$(id -g) \ | ||
| ghcr.io/plgd-dev/hub/cert-tool:vnext \ | ||
| --cmd.generateRootCA --outCert=/certs/tls.crt --outKey=/certs/tls.key \ | ||
| --cert.subject.cn=standby.internal.root.ca --cert.validFor=876000h | ||
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| mkdir -p .tmp/standby/certs/storage | ||
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| --rm -v $(pwd)/.tmp/standby/certs/storage:/certs \ | ||
| --user $(id -u):$(id -g) \ | ||
| ghcr.io/plgd-dev/hub/cert-tool:vnext \ | ||
| --cmd.generateRootCA --outCert=/certs/tls.crt --outKey=/certs/tls.key \ | ||
| --cert.subject.cn=standby.storage.root.ca --cert.validFor=876000h | ||
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Security Practices for Handling Certificates
The steps for generating CA certificates are well-documented. However, explicit security recommendations for handling these certificates, such as permissions and access controls, are missing and should be addressed to prevent security lapses.
Please ensure to add detailed security guidelines for handling the generated certificates.
| The Device Provisioning Service (DPS) requires a certificate for the manufacturer. This certificate is used to authenticate the manufacturer when enrolling devices, and it needs to be stored in the file `.tmp/certs/manufacturer/tls.crt`. | ||
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| To download the proprietary device provisioning service Docker image, you need to have a token for the GitHub Container Registry. This token needs to be stored in the file `.tmp/tokens/plgd-docker-auth-token.txt`. |
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Clarify Storage Requirements for DPS Certificates
The instructions for setting up the Device Provisioning Service are clear. However, explaining why the manufacturer's certificate is stored at a specific path could enhance understanding and ensure the path's security is adequately justified.
Would you like me to add a section explaining the security benefits of the chosen storage path?
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| grantType: "clientCredentials" | ||
| redirectURL: "https://$DOMAIN/things" | ||
| scopes: ['openid'] | ||
| - name: "plgd.web" | ||
| clientID: "test" | ||
| clientSecret: "test" | ||
| redirectURL: "https://$DOMAIN/things" | ||
| scopes: ['openid'] | ||
| useInUi: true | ||
| mongodb: | ||
| tls: | ||
| extraDnsNames: | ||
| - "mongodb.$DOMAIN" | ||
| standbyTool: | ||
| enabled: true | ||
| replicaSet: | ||
| standby: | ||
| members: | ||
| - "mongodb-0.$DOMAIN:27017" | ||
| - "mongodb-1.$DOMAIN:27017" | ||
| - "mongodb-2.$DOMAIN:27017" | ||
| externalAccess: | ||
| enabled: true | ||
| externalMaster: | ||
| enabled: true | ||
| host: "$PRIMARY_MONGO_DB" | ||
| service: | ||
| type: LoadBalancer | ||
| publicNames: | ||
| - "mongodb-0.$DOMAIN" | ||
| - "mongodb-1.$DOMAIN" | ||
| - "mongodb-2.$DOMAIN" | ||
| annotationsList: | ||
| - external-dns.alpha.kubernetes.io/hostname: "mongodb-0.$DOMAIN" | ||
| - external-dns.alpha.kubernetes.io/hostname: "mongodb-1.$DOMAIN" | ||
| - external-dns.alpha.kubernetes.io/hostname: "mongodb-2.$DOMAIN" | ||
| nats: | ||
| enabled: false | ||
| certmanager: | ||
| storage: | ||
| issuer: | ||
| kind: ClusterIssuer | ||
| name: storage-plgd-ca-issuer | ||
| internal: | ||
| issuer: | ||
| kind: ClusterIssuer | ||
| name: internal-plgd-ca-issuer | ||
| default: | ||
| ca: | ||
| issuerRef: | ||
| kind: ClusterIssuer | ||
| name: external-plgd-ca-issuer | ||
| httpgateway: | ||
| apiDomain: "$DOMAIN" | ||
| grpcgateway: | ||
| domain: "$DOMAIN" | ||
| certificateauthority: | ||
| domain: "$DOMAIN" | ||
| coapgateway: | ||
| service: | ||
| type: NodePort | ||
| nodePort: 15684 | ||
| resourcedirectory: | ||
| publicConfiguration: | ||
| coapGateway: "coaps+tcp://$DOMAIN:15684" | ||
| deviceProvisioningService: | ||
| apiDomain: "$DOMAIN" | ||
| service: | ||
| type: NodePort | ||
| image: | ||
| dockerConfigSecret: | | ||
| { | ||
| "auths": { | ||
| "ghcr.io": { | ||
| "auth": "$(cat $DOCKER_AUTH_TOKEN)" | ||
| } | ||
| } | ||
| } | ||
| enrollmentGroups: | ||
| - id: "5db6ccde-05e1-480b-a522-c1591ad7dfd2" | ||
| owner: "1" | ||
| attestationMechanism: | ||
| x509: | ||
| certificateChain: |- | ||
| $(sed 's/^/ /' $MANUFACTURER_CERTIFICATE_CA) | ||
| hub: | ||
| coapGateway: "$DOMAIN:15684" | ||
| certificateAuthority: | ||
| grpc: | ||
| address: "$DOMAIN:443" | ||
| authorization: | ||
| provider: | ||
| name: "plgd.dps" | ||
| clientId: "test" | ||
| clientSecret: "test" | ||
| audience: "https://$DOMAIN" | ||
| EOF | ||
| helm upgrade -i -n plgd --create-namespace -f values.yaml hub plgd/plgd-hub | ||
| helm upgrade -i -n plgd --create-namespace -f values.yaml dps plgd/plgd-dps | ||
| ``` |
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Clarify Standby Cluster Configurations
Deploying plgd to the standby cluster follows a similar pattern to the primary cluster, which is good for consistency. However, explaining why certain settings are different (e.g., STANDBY=true, NATs disabled) would help users understand the rationale behind these choices better.
Would you like me to add explanations for these specific configurations?
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