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  • Documentation
    • Updated various configuration documents to include new settings for message size limits and authorization enhancements for the gRPC API.
    • Introduced OpenTelemetry exporter configuration settings across multiple services for improved observability.
    • Added a new section for "Automated Device Configuration," describing how the Snippet Service helps ensure accurate device setup and automatically applies predefined configurations in response to events.

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The recent changes significantly enhance the configuration and functionality of various services by introducing new properties for gRPC API settings, including message size limits and structured authorization endpoints. Additionally, comprehensive OpenTelemetry exporter configurations have been added. A new Snippet Service has also been introduced, facilitating automated device configuration to ensure accurate setups with minimal manual intervention.

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content/en/docs/configuration/certificate-authority.md
content/en/docs/configuration/grpc-gateway.md
content/en/docs/configuration/identity-store.md
content/en/docs/configuration/resource-aggregate.md
content/en/docs/configuration/resource-directory.md
Added new gRPC API properties including sendMsgSize, recvMsgSize, and enhanced OpenTelemetry exporter configurations. Updated authorization settings for better organization and security.
content/en/docs/configuration/snippet-service.md Introduced the Snippet Service configuration, covering Docker image setup, YAML configuration, logging, gRPC and HTTP APIs, Event Bus integration, MongoDB settings, and OpenTelemetry exporter configuration for observability.
content/en/docs/features/control-plane/control-plane.md Added a section on "Automated Device Configuration," detailing the Snippet Service's role in ensuring accurate device setups and applying predefined configurations automatically in response to events.
content/en/docs/services/snippet-service/features.md Outlined the capabilities of the Snippet Service, detailing its functionality for creating and managing device configurations based on resource change events, with support for various filter types and a user-friendly interface.

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In the digital realm, where bytes do play,
New settings emerge, brightening the day.
gRPC whispers, "Limit my size,"
While Snippet Service helps devices rise.
OpenTelemetry watches, with eyes so keen,
As configurations dance, a well-oiled machine.
Hooray for progress, let the bytes sing!


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content/en/docs/configuration/grpc-gateway.md (3)

39-40: Ensure clarity and completeness in the gRPC API settings.

The new properties for message size limits are correctly added. However, it would be clearer to mention the unit of the message size (bytes) explicitly.

- | `apis.grpc.sendMsgSize` | int32 | `Set the max message size in bytes the server can send. 0 means 2147483647` | `4194304` |
- | `apis.grpc.recvMsgSize` | int32 | `Set the max message size in bytes the server can receive. 0 means 4194304` | `4194304` |
+ | `apis.grpc.sendMsgSize` | int32 | `Set the max message size in bytes the server can send (in bytes). 0 means 2147483647` | `4194304` |
+ | `apis.grpc.recvMsgSize` | int32 | `Set the max message size in bytes the server can receive (in bytes). 0 means 4194304` | `4194304` |

56-65: Ensure consistency in the authorization endpoints settings.

The new settings for authorization endpoints are correctly added. Ensure that the descriptions are clear and consistent.

+ | `apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].authority` | string | `Authority is the address of the token-issuing authentication server. Services will use this URI to find and retrieve the public key that can be used to validate the token’s signature.` | `""` |
+ | `apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.maxIdleConns` | int | `It controls the maximum number of idle (keep-alive) connections across all hosts. Zero means no limit.` | `16` |
+ | `apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.maxConnsPerHost` | int | `It optionally limits the total number of connections per host, including connections in the dialing, active, and idle states. On limit violation, dials will block. Zero means no limit.` | `32` |
+ | `apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.maxIdleConnsPerHost` | int | `If non-zero, controls the maximum idle (keep-alive) connections to keep per-host. If zero, DefaultMaxIdleConnsPerHost is used.` | `16` |
+ | `apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.idleConnTimeout` | string | `The maximum amount of time an idle (keep-alive) connection will remain idle before closing itself. Zero means no limit.` | `30s` |
+ | `apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.timeout` | string | `A time limit for requests made by this Client. A Timeout of zero means no timeout.` | `10s` |
+ | `apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.tls.caPool` | []string | `File paths to the root certificates in PEM format. The file may contain multiple certificates.` |  `[]` |
+ | `apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.tls.keyFile` | string | `File path to private key in PEM format.` | `""` |
+ | `apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.tls.certFile` | string | `File path to certificate in PEM format.` | `""` |
+ | `apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.tls.useSystemCAPool` | bool | `If true, use system certification pool.` | `false` |

133-143: Ensure clarity and completeness in the OpenTelemetry exporter settings.

The new properties for the OpenTelemetry exporter are correctly added. Ensure that the descriptions are clear and consistent.

+ | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.enabled` | bool | `Enable OTLP gRPC exporter` | `false` |
+ | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.address` | string | `The gRPC collector to which the exporter is going to send data` | `""` |
+ | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.keepAlive.time` | string | `After a duration of this time if the client doesn't see any activity it pings the server to see if the transport is still alive.` | `10s` |
+ | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.keepAlive.timeout` | string | `After having pinged for keepalive check, the client waits for a duration of Timeout and if no activity is seen even after that the connection is closed.` | `20s` |
+ | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.keepAlive.permitWithoutStream` | bool | `If true, client sends keepalive pings even with no active RPCs. If false, when there are no active RPCs, Time and Timeout will be ignored and no keepalive pings will be sent.` | `true` |
+ | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.tls.caPool` | string | `File path to the root certificate in PEM format which might contain multiple certificates in a single file.` |  `""` |
+ | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.tls.keyFile` | string | `File path to private key in PEM format.` | `""` |
+ | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.tls.certFile` | string | `File path to certificate in PEM format.` | `""` |
+ | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.tls.useSystemCAPool` | bool | `If true, use system certification pool.` | `false` |
content/en/docs/configuration/cloud2cloud-gateway.md (2)

127-128: Title and Introduction for OpenTelemetry Exporter Section

The title "Open telemetry exporter" should be capitalized for consistency with other section titles. Additionally, the introductory line should be expanded to provide a clearer overview.

- ### Open telemetry exporter
+ ### OpenTelemetry Exporter

- The plgd open telemetry exporter configuration.
+ The plgd OpenTelemetry exporter configuration allows for the exporting of telemetry data using the OTLP gRPC protocol.

133-133: Clarify Default Value for clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.enabled

The default value for the clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.enabled property should be explicitly stated as false for clarity.

- | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.enabled` | bool | `Enable OTLP gRPC exporter` | `false` |
+ | `clients.openTelemetryCollector.grpc.enabled` | bool | `Enable OTLP gRPC exporter.` | `false` |
content/en/docs/configuration/snippet-service.md (4)

38-38: Clarify the configuration description.

The phrase "Listen specification" is unclear. Consider changing it to "Listen to specification".

- | `apis.grpc.address` | string | `Listen specification <host>:<port> for grpc client connection.` | `"0.0.0.0:9100"` |
+ | `apis.grpc.address` | string | `Listen to specification <host>:<port> for grpc client connection.` | `"0.0.0.0:9100"` |

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41-41: Add a comma after "Otherwise".

The sentence structure requires a comma after "Otherwise" for clarity.

- | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.minTime` | string | `The minimum amount of time a client should wait before sending a keepalive ping. Otherwise the server close connection.` | `5s`|
+ | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.minTime` | string | `The minimum amount of time a client should wait before sending a keepalive ping. Otherwise, the server closes the connection.` | `5s`|

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42-42: Add a comma after "Otherwise".

The sentence structure requires a comma after "Otherwise" for clarity.

- | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.permitWithoutStream` | bool |  `If true, server allows keepalive pings even when there are no active streams(RPCs). Otherwise the server close connection.`  | `true` |
+ | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.permitWithoutStream` | bool |  `If true, server allows keepalive pings even when there are no active streams(RPCs). Otherwise, the server closes the connection.`  | `true` |

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80-80: Typographical correction.

Change "a event bus" to "an event bus" for correct grammar.

- plgd hub uses NATS messaging system as a event bus to be notified about device changes to trigger conditions evaluation.
+ plgd hub uses NATS messaging system as an event bus to be notified about device changes to trigger conditions evaluation.
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  • content/en/docs/configuration/certificate-authority.md (3 hunks)
  • content/en/docs/configuration/cloud2cloud-connector.md (1 hunks)
  • content/en/docs/configuration/cloud2cloud-gateway.md (1 hunks)
  • content/en/docs/configuration/coap-gateway.md (1 hunks)
  • content/en/docs/configuration/grpc-gateway.md (3 hunks)
  • content/en/docs/configuration/http-gateway.md (1 hunks)
  • content/en/docs/configuration/identity-store.md (3 hunks)
  • content/en/docs/configuration/m2m-oauth-server.md (1 hunks)
  • content/en/docs/configuration/mongodb-standby-tool.md (1 hunks)
  • content/en/docs/configuration/resource-aggregate.md (3 hunks)
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  • content/en/docs/configuration/snippet-service.md (1 hunks)
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  • content/en/docs/features/control-plane/control-plane.md (1 hunks)
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  • content/en/docs/services/snippet-service/features.md (1 hunks)
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content/en/docs/services/snippet-service/features.md (1)

1-26: LGTM!

The documentation is clear and accurately describes the features and planned features of the Snippet Service.

content/en/docs/configuration/m2m-oauth-server.md (1)

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The documentation is clear and accurately describes the configuration details of the Machine to Machine OAuth Server, including the new OpenTelemetry exporter settings.

content/en/docs/configuration/identity-store.md (1)

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The documentation is clear and accurately describes the configuration details of the Identity Store, including the new gRPC settings and OpenTelemetry exporter settings.

content/en/docs/configuration/certificate-authority.md (3)

41-42: Ensure consistency in message size limits.

The sendMsgSize and recvMsgSize properties are correctly added. Ensure these settings are consistently applied across all relevant configurations.


56-65: New gRPC authorization endpoint settings look good.

The new settings for HTTP and TLS configurations within the authorization endpoints are correctly added. Ensure these settings are consistently applied across all relevant configurations.


86-94: New OpenTelemetry exporter settings look good.

The new settings for enabling the OTLP gRPC exporter and specifying the collector address, keep-alive parameters, and TLS configurations are correctly added. Ensure these settings are consistently applied across all relevant configurations.

content/en/docs/configuration/resource-aggregate.md (3)

40-41: Ensure consistency in message size limits.

The sendMsgSize and recvMsgSize properties are correctly added. Ensure these settings are consistently applied across all relevant configurations.


54-63: New gRPC authorization endpoint settings look good.

The new settings for HTTP and TLS configurations within the authorization endpoints are correctly added. Ensure these settings are consistently applied across all relevant configurations.


118-126: New OpenTelemetry exporter settings look good.

The new settings for enabling the OTLP gRPC exporter and specifying the collector address, keep-alive parameters, and TLS configurations are correctly added. Ensure these settings are consistently applied across all relevant configurations.

content/en/docs/configuration/http-gateway.md (1)

115-123: New OpenTelemetry exporter settings look good.

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content/en/docs/configuration/resource-directory.md (3)

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55-64: New gRPC authorization endpoint settings look good.

The new settings for HTTP and TLS configurations within the authorization endpoints are correctly added. Ensure these settings are consistently applied across all relevant configurations.


118-126: New OpenTelemetry exporter settings look good.

The new settings for enabling the OTLP gRPC exporter and specifying the collector address, keep-alive parameters, and TLS configurations are correctly added. Ensure these settings are consistently applied across all relevant configurations.

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- | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.minTime` | string | `The minimum amount of time a client should wait before sending a keepalive ping. Otherwise the server close connection.` | `5s`|
+ | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.minTime` | string | `The minimum amount of time a client should wait before sending a keepalive ping. Otherwise, the server close connection.` | `5s`|

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38-38: Clarify the description for apis.grpc.address.

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- | `apis.grpc.address` | string | `Listen specification <host>:<port> for grpc client connection.` | `"0.0.0.0:9100"` |
+ | `apis.grpc.address` | string | `Listen to specification <host>:<port> for grpc client connection.` | `"0.0.0.0:9100"` |
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- | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.minTime` | string | `The minimum amount of time a client should wait before sending a keepalive ping. Otherwise the server close connection.` | `5s`|
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- | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.permitWithoutStream` | bool |  `If true, server allows keepalive pings even when there are no active streams(RPCs). Otherwise the server close connection.`  | `true` |
+ | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.permitWithoutStream` | bool |  `If true, server allows keepalive pings even when there are no active streams(RPCs). Otherwise, the server close connection.`  | `true` |
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- | `apis.grpc.keepAlive.maxConnectionAgeGrace` | string | `An additive period after MaxConnectionAge after which the connection will be forcibly closed. 0s means infinity.` | `0s` |
+ | `apis.grpc.keepAlive.maxConnectionAgeGrace` | string | `An additive period after MaxConnectionAge, after which the connection will be forcibly closed. 0s means infinity.` | `0s` |
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72-72: Clarify the description for apis.http.address.

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- | `apis.http.address` | string | `Listen specification <host>:<port> for http client connection.` | `"0.0.0.0:9101"` |
+ | `apis.http.address` | string | `Listen to specification <host>:<port> for http client connection.` | `"0.0.0.0:9101"` |
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80-80: Use 'an' instead of 'a'.

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- plgd hub uses NATS messaging system as a event bus to be notified about device changes to trigger conditions evaluation.
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- | `clients.resourceAggregate.grpc.enforcementPolicy.minTime` | string | `The minimum amount of time a client should wait before sending a keepalive ping. Otherwise the server close connection.` | `5s`|
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- | `clients.resourceAggregate.grpc.enforcementPolicy.permitWithoutStream` | bool |  `If true, server allows keepalive pings even when there are no active streams(RPCs). Otherwise the server close connection.`  | `true` |
+ | `clients.resourceAggregate.grpc.enforcementPolicy.permitWithoutStream` | bool |  `If true, server allows keepalive pings even when there are no active streams(RPCs). Otherwise, the server close connection.`  | `true` |
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- | `clients.resourceAggregate.grpc.keepAlive.maxConnectionAgeGrace` | string | `An additive period after MaxConnectionAge after which the connection will be forcibly closed. 0s means infinity.` | `0s` |
+ | `clients.resourceAggregate.grpc.keepAlive.maxConnectionAgeGrace` | string | `An additive period after MaxConnectionAge, after which the connection will be forcibly closed. 0s means infinity.` | `0s` |
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content/en/docs/configuration/snippet-service.md (1)

20-20: Fix the link text for YAML configuration template.

The link text should be more descriptive.

- A configuration template is available on [snippet-service/config.yaml](https://github.com/plgd-dev/hub/blob/main/snippet-service/config.yaml).
+ A configuration template is available at [snippet-service/config.yaml](https://github.com/plgd-dev/hub/blob/main/snippet-service/config.yaml).
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1-8: Metadata section looks good.

The metadata section follows the correct format and contains appropriate information.


10-10: Description section looks good.

The description provides a clear and concise overview of the Snippet service.


12-16: Docker image section looks good.

The command to pull the Docker image is correct and follows the standard format.


92-107: Storage section looks good.

The section is well-organized and provides detailed information on configuration properties.


129-144: OpenTelemetry exporter section looks good.

The section is well-organized and provides detailed information on configuration properties.

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content/en/docs/configuration/identity-store.md (5)

39-39: Clarify the default value for apis.grpc.sendMsgSize.

The description states "0 means 2147483647," but the default value is 4194304. This might be confusing.

Consider rephrasing for clarity:

- `Set the max message size in bytes the server can send. 0 means 2147483647`
+ `Set the max message size in bytes the server can send. Default is 4194304 bytes. 0 means 2147483647 bytes.`

40-40: Clarify the default value for apis.grpc.recvMsgSize.

The description states "0 means 4194304," but the default value is 4194304. This might be confusing.

Consider rephrasing for clarity:

- `Set the max message size in bytes the server can receive. 0 means 4194304`
+ `Set the max message size in bytes the server can receive. Default is 4194304 bytes. 0 means 4194304 bytes.`

54-63: Ensure consistency in the descriptions of apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http properties.

The descriptions are clear, but ensure they are consistently formatted and provide necessary details.

For example, consider adding units for time-related properties:

- `The maximum amount of time an idle (keep-alive) connection will remain idle before closing itself. Zero means no limit.`
+ `The maximum amount of time (in seconds) an idle (keep-alive) connection will remain idle before closing itself. Zero means no limit.`

94-108: Ensure clarity in OpenTelemetry exporter settings descriptions.

The descriptions are clear, but ensure they provide necessary details and units where applicable.

For example, consider adding units for time-related properties:

- `After a duration of this time if the client doesn't see any activity it pings the server to see if the transport is still alive.`
+ `After a duration of this time (in seconds) if the client doesn't see any activity it pings the server to see if the transport is still alive.`

109-111: Ensure clarity in the note on time-related string types.

The note is clear but ensure it provides necessary details and examples.

Consider adding more examples for clarity:

- `Valid time units are "ns", "us", "ms", "s", "m", "h".`
+ `Valid time units are "ns" (nanoseconds), "us" (microseconds), "ms" (milliseconds), "s" (seconds), "m" (minutes), "h" (hours).`
content/en/docs/configuration/certificate-authority.md (5)

41-41: Clarify the default value for apis.grpc.sendMsgSize.

The description states "0 means 2147483647," but the default value is 4194304. This might be confusing.

Consider rephrasing for clarity:

- `Set the max message size in bytes the server can send. 0 means 2147483647`
+ `Set the max message size in bytes the server can send. Default is 4194304 bytes. 0 means 2147483647 bytes.`

42-42: Clarify the default value for apis.grpc.recvMsgSize.

The description states "0 means 4194304," but the default value is 4194304. This might be confusing.

Consider rephrasing for clarity:

- `Set the max message size in bytes the server can receive. 0 means 4194304`
+ `Set the max message size in bytes the server can receive. Default is 4194304 bytes. 0 means 4194304 bytes.`

56-65: Ensure consistency in the descriptions of apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http properties.

The descriptions are clear, but ensure they are consistently formatted and provide necessary details.

For example, consider adding units for time-related properties:

- `The maximum amount of time an idle (keep-alive) connection will remain idle before closing itself. Zero means no limit.`
+ `The maximum amount of time (in seconds) an idle (keep-alive) connection will remain idle before closing itself. Zero means no limit.`

80-94: Ensure clarity in OpenTelemetry exporter settings descriptions.

The descriptions are clear, but ensure they provide necessary details and units where applicable.

For example, consider adding units for time-related properties:

- `After a duration of this time if the client doesn't see any activity it pings the server to see if the transport is still alive.`
+ `After a duration of this time (in seconds) if the client doesn't see any activity it pings the server to see if the transport is still alive.`

95-97: Ensure clarity in the note on time-related string types.

The note is clear but ensure it provides necessary details and examples.

Consider adding more examples for clarity:

- `Valid time units are "ns", "us", "ms", "s", "m", "h".`
+ `Valid time units are "ns" (nanoseconds), "us" (microseconds), "ms" (milliseconds), "s" (seconds), "m" (minutes), "h" (hours).`
content/en/docs/configuration/snippet-service.md (2)

39-39: Clarify the default value for apis.grpc.sendMsgSize.

The description states "0 means 2147483647," but the default value is 4194304. This might be confusing.

Consider rephrasing for clarity:

- `Set the max message size in bytes the server can send. 0 means 2147483647`
+ `Set the max message size in bytes the server can send. Default is 4194304 bytes. 0 means 2147483647 bytes.`

40-40: Clarify the default value for apis.grpc.recvMsgSize.

The description states "0 means 4194304," but the default value is 4194304. This might be confusing.

Consider rephrasing for clarity:

- `Set the max message size in bytes the server can receive. 0 means 4194304`
+ `Set the max message size in bytes the server can receive. Default is 4194304 bytes. 0 means 4194304 bytes.`
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- | `apis.http.address` | string | `Listen specification <host>:<port> for http client connection.` | `"0.0.0.0:9101"` |
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56-63: LGTM!

The new properties related to authorization endpoints are clear and well-defined.


86-94: LGTM!

The new properties for OpenTelemetry exporter configuration are well-defined and enhance the configuration flexibility.


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- | `apis.grpc.keepAlive.maxConnectionAgeGrace` | string | `An additive period after MaxConnectionAge, after which the connection will be forcibly closed. 0s means infinity.` | `0s` |
+ | `apis.grpc.keepAlive.maxConnectionAgeGrace` | string | `An additive period after MaxConnectionAge, after which the connection will be forcibly closed. 0s means infinity.` | `0s` |

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- | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.minTime` | string | `The minimum amount of time a client should wait before sending a keepalive ping. Otherwise, the server closes the connection.` | `5s`|
+ | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.minTime` | string | `The minimum amount of time a client should wait before sending a keepalive ping. Otherwise, the server closes the connection.` | `5s`|
- | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.permitWithoutStream` | bool |  `If true, the server allows keepalive pings even when there are no active streams (RPCs). Otherwise, the server closes the connection.`  | `true` |
+ | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.permitWithoutStream` | bool |  `If true, the server allows keepalive pings even when there are no active streams (RPCs). Otherwise, the server closes the connection.`  | `true` |

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56-63: LGTM!

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133-143: LGTM!

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- | `apis.grpc.address` | string | `Listen specification <host>:<port> for grpc client connection.` | `"0.0.0.0:9100"` |
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- | `apis.grpc.enforcementPolicy.permitWithoutStream` | bool |  `If true, the server allows keepalive pings even when there are no active streams (RPCs). Otherwise, the server closes the connection.`  | `true` |
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39-40: Clarify default values for message size limits.

The descriptions for apis.grpc.sendMsgSize and apis.grpc.recvMsgSize mention that 0 means a specific value. Ensure the default values are clear and consistent.

- | `apis.grpc.sendMsgSize` | int32 | `Set the max message size in bytes the server can send. 0 means 2147483647` | `4194304` |
+ | `apis.grpc.sendMsgSize` | int32 | `Set the max message size in bytes the server can send. 0 means 2147483647.` | `4194304` |
- | `apis.grpc.recvMsgSize` | int32 | `Set the max message size in bytes the server can receive. 0 means 4194304` | `4194304` |
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39-39: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.sendMsgSize property is well-defined with a clear description and default value.


40-40: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.recvMsgSize property is well-defined with a clear description and default value.


55-55: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].authority property is well-defined and the restructuring allows for more granular configuration.


56-56: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.maxIdleConns property is well-defined and the restructuring allows for more granular configuration.


57-57: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.maxConnsPerHost property is well-defined and the restructuring allows for more granular configuration.


58-58: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.maxIdleConnsPerHost property is well-defined and the restructuring allows for more granular configuration.


59-59: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.idleConnTimeout property is well-defined and the restructuring allows for more granular configuration.


60-60: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.timeout property is well-defined and the restructuring allows for more granular configuration.

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39-39: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.sendMsgSize property is well-defined with a clear description and default value.


40-40: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.recvMsgSize property is well-defined with a clear description and default value.


54-54: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].authority property is well-defined with a clear description.


55-55: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.maxIdleConns property is well-defined with a clear description.


56-56: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.maxConnsPerHost property is well-defined with a clear description.


57-57: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.maxIdleConnsPerHost property is well-defined with a clear description.


58-58: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.idleConnTimeout property is well-defined with a clear description.


59-59: LGTM!

The apis.grpc.authorization.endpoints[].http.timeout property is well-defined with a clear description.

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