Feedback from Frederic

docs/paper.md

@@ -52,15 +52,15 @@ In addition, ASTE provides performance and accuracy metrics of the configured si
 # Statement of need
 
 \autoref{fig:dependency-graph} illustrates the software stack required for a coupled simulation setup using FEniCS and OpenFOAM as examples, and compares it to a simulation setup using ASTE.
-Beside preCICE itself, core ingredients for practical applications are preCICE API language bindings, preCICE adapters, the simulation frameworks and their dependencies.
+Besides preCICE itself, core ingredients for practical applications are preCICE API language bindings, preCICE adapters, the simulation frameworks and their dependencies.
 ASTE, on the other hand, replaces coupled models and only requires a reduced set of dependencies.
 It abstracts the computational complexity of the models away by extracting the relevant information from VTK files instead and passing extracted data to preCICE, potentially in parallel on distributed memory.
 While the VTK files may stem from actual simulations, ASTE can also generate artificial VTK files with prescribed coupling data.
-On top of that, the entire tool chain of ASTE enables to easily alter the simulation setup through different mesh partitionings, and specifically for the configuration of data mappings in preCICE, ASTE can evaluate additional accuracy metrics.
+On top of that, the entire tool chain of ASTE enables to easily alter the simulation setup through different mesh partitionings, and specifically for the configuration of data mappings in preCICE, ASTE can evaluate additional accuracy metrics of used mappings.
 
 ![Dependency graph for a coupled simulation with FEniCS and OpenFOAM compared to a dependency graph using ASTE.\label{fig:dependency-graph}](dependency-graph.pdf)
 
-First of all, ASTE provides a reproducible environment which enables to share and rerun scenarios, regardless of the availability of involved software components. This capability is particularly useful for debugging issues reported by users of preCICE, who can share their scenarios (e.g. through the [preCICE forum](https://precice.discourse.group/)) for developers to analyze, even in case the involved software is unavailable due to licensing terms or being closed-source.
+From an application standpoint, ASTE provides a reproducible environment which enables to share and rerun scenarios, regardless of the availability of involved software components. This capability is particularly useful for debugging issues reported by users of preCICE, who can share their scenarios (e.g. through the [preCICE forum](https://precice.discourse.group/)) for developers to analyze, even in case the involved software is unavailable due to licensing terms or being closed-source.
 
 Another crucial argument for emulating models is computational efficiency.
 For coupled simulations, the main computational load is typically carried by the models instead of the coupling library.