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c-api/perfmaps.po

@@ -45,8 +45,8 @@ msgid ""
 "In Python, these helper APIs can be used by libraries and features that rely "
 "on generating machine code on the fly."
 msgstr ""
-"在 Python 中，這些輔助 API 可供依賴運行期間 (on the fly) 產生機器碼的函式庫和"
-"功能使用。"
+"在 Python 中，這些輔助 API 可以被依賴於運行期間 (on the fly) 產生機器碼的函式庫和"
+"功能所使用。"
 
 #: ../../c-api/perfmaps.rst:19
 msgid ""
@@ -75,15 +75,15 @@ msgid ""
 "information about the cause of a failure."
 msgstr ""
 "建立/打開 perf map 檔案成功時回傳 ``0``，失敗時回傳 ``-1``，建立鎖時失敗則回"
-"傳 ``-2``。檢查 ``errno`` 以獲取造成失敗的資訊。"
+"傳 ``-2``。檢查 ``errno`` 以獲取更多造成失敗的資訊。"
 
 #: ../../c-api/perfmaps.rst:35
 msgid ""
 "Write one single entry to the ``/tmp/perf-$pid.map`` file. This function is "
 "thread safe. Here is what an example entry looks like::"
 msgstr ""
-"將單一條目寫入 ``/tmp/perf-$pid.map`` 檔案。此函式是執行緒安全的。以下是範例"
-"條目的樣子："
+"將單一條目寫入 ``/tmp/perf-$pid.map`` 檔案。此函式是執行緒安全的。以下是一個"
+"條目的範例："
 
 #: ../../c-api/perfmaps.rst:41
 msgid ""
@@ -92,8 +92,8 @@ msgid ""
 "same error codes as :c:func:`PyUnstable_PerfMapState_Init` on failure."
 msgstr ""
 "如果尚未開啟 perf map 檔案，將在寫入條目之前呼叫 :c:func:"
-"`PyUnstable_PerfMapState_Init`。成功時回傳 ``0``，失敗時傳回與 :c:func:"
-"`PyUnstable_PerfMapState_Init` 相同的錯誤碼。"
+"`PyUnstable_PerfMapState_Init`。成功時回傳 ``0``，失敗時回傳與 :c:func:"
+"`PyUnstable_PerfMapState_Init` 失敗時相同的錯誤碼。"
 
 #: ../../c-api/perfmaps.rst:47
 msgid ""