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Terminology

electronic braille
refreshable braille
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The terms "electronic braille" and "refreshable braille" are used interchangeably, which denotes a device with pop-up pins to present the braille on a tactile screen. These devices can be used as a display for a personal computer, or they may be a self-contained multipurpose note taker.

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The terms "electronic braille" and "refreshable braille" can be used interchangeably, which denotes a device with pop-up pins to present the braille on a tactile screen. These devices can be used as a display attached to a personal computer, or they may be a self-contained multipurpose note taker with a refreshable braille display.

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Why this information is important for accessibility

deprecated, an EPUB 3 supports page navigation and better structural semantics; an MP3 format audiobook will be less structured than an Audiobook, etc.
  • The protection measure may block assistive technologies such as screen readers. In addition, - many specific eReading devices such as DAISY readers or Braille notepads are not equipped to read + many specific eReading devices such as DAISY readers or Braille note takers are not equipped to read encrypted files.
  • The name of the publishing house can highlight the efforts it has made in terms of accessibility.
  • The main language of the content enables readers to be confident that they will be able to read - with their Assistive Technology that uses synthesized voice or the corresponding Braille table + with their Assistive Technology that uses synthesized voice or the corresponding Braille translation table for the language.
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    Supports nonvisual reading

    Indicates whether all content required for comprehension can be consumed in text and therefore is - fully available to assistive technologies and reading systems using text-to-speech or electronic - braille functionality.

    - + available to reading systems with text-to-speech or refreshable braille capabilities

    This field answers whether nonvisual reading is possible, not possible, or unknown.

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    Examples