From 671f8acc4678b59f52d2339dd35d573f05f0fe96 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: George Kerscher <kerscher@montana.com>
Date: Wed, 30 Oct 2024 16:29:18 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Made changes in the language around refreshable and
 electronic braille

---
 .../2.0/draft/guidelines/index.html           | 25 ++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/a11y-meta-display-guide/2.0/draft/guidelines/index.html b/a11y-meta-display-guide/2.0/draft/guidelines/index.html
index 506239b7..1e6ec531 100644
--- a/a11y-meta-display-guide/2.0/draft/guidelines/index.html
+++ b/a11y-meta-display-guide/2.0/draft/guidelines/index.html
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ <h3>Terminology</h3>
 <dt><dfn>electronic braille</dfn></dt>
 <dt><dfn>refreshable braille</dfn></dt>
 <dd>
-<p>The terms "electronic braille" and "refreshable braille" are used interchangeably, which denotes a device with pop-up pins to present the braille on a tactile screen. These devices can be used as a display for a personal computer, or they may be a self-contained multipurpose note taker. </p>
+<p>The terms "electronic braille" and "refreshable braille" can be  used interchangeably, which denotes a device with pop-up pins to present the braille on a tactile screen. These devices can be used as a display attached to  a personal computer, or they may be a self-contained multipurpose note taker with a refreshable braille display. </p>
 </dd>
    </dl>
 </section>
@@ -327,13 +327,13 @@ <h3>Why this information is important for accessibility</h3>
 						deprecated, an EPUB 3 supports page navigation and better structural semantics; an MP3 format audiobook will be
 						less structured than an Audiobook, etc. </li>
 					<li> The protection measure may block assistive technologies such as screen readers. In addition,
-						many specific eReading devices such as DAISY readers or Braille notepads are not equipped to read
+						many specific eReading devices such as DAISY readers or Braille note takers are not equipped to read
 						encrypted files. </li>
 
 					<li> The name of the publishing house can highlight the efforts it has made in terms of
 						accessibility. </li>
 					<li> The main language of the content enables readers to be confident that they will be able to read
-						with their Assistive Technology that uses synthesized voice or the corresponding Braille table
+						with their Assistive Technology that uses synthesized voice or the corresponding Braille translation table
 						for the language. </li>
 				</ul>
 			</section>
@@ -463,14 +463,7 @@ <h3 data-localization-id="nonvisual-reading-title">Supports nonvisual reading</h
 				</div>
 
 				<p>Indicates whether all content required for comprehension can be consumed in text and therefore is
-					fully available to assistive technologies and reading systems using text-to-speech or electronic
-					braille functionality.</p>
-<!--
-				<div class="note">
-					<p>The terms "electronic braille" and "refreshable braille" are used interchangeably, which denotes
-						a device with pop-up pins to present the braille on a tactile screen.</p>
-				</div>
--->
+					available  to reading systems with text-to-speech or refreshable braille capabilities</p>
 
 				<p>This field answers whether nonvisual reading is possible, not possible, or unknown.</p>
 
@@ -489,16 +482,14 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 					<aside class="example" title="Descriptive explanations">
 						<ul>
 							<li data-localization-id="nonvisual-reading-readable" data-localization-mode="descriptive"
-								>All content is available in generated read aloud speech and electronic braille</li>
+								>All content is available in generated read aloud speech and generated refreshable  braille</li>
 							<li data-localization-id="nonvisual-reading-may-not-fully"
 								data-localization-mode="descriptive">Portions of the content may not be available in
-								generated read aloud speech and electronic braille</li>
+								generated read aloud speech and generated refreshable  braille</li>
 							<li data-localization-id="nonvisual-reading-not-fully" data-localization-mode="descriptive"
-								>Not all of the content will be available in generated read aloud speech and electronic
+								>Not all of the content will be available in generated read aloud speech and generated refreshable 
 								braille</li>
-							<!--To be Confirmed (see https://github.com/w3c/publ-a11y/issues/367)><li data-localization-id="nonvisual-reading-unknown">It is not known if the content will be available in generated read aloud speech and electronic
-								braille.</li> -->
-						</ul>
+													</ul>
 					</aside>
 
 					<aside class="example" title="Compact explanations">