tcUrl reword fragment/secondary resource suggestion

zenomt · Jul 10, 2023 · ccd7bc5 · ccd7bc5
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diff --git a/rtmp-errata-addenda.html b/rtmp-errata-addenda.html
@@ -1222,7 +1222,7 @@
 <dl id="identifiers">
 <dt class="label-published">Published:</dt>
 <dd class="published">
-<time datetime="2023-07-08" class="published">8 July 2023</time>
+<time datetime="2023-07-09" class="published">9 July 2023</time>
     </dd>
 <dt class="label-authors">Author:</dt>
 <dd class="authors">
@@ -1872,8 +1872,8 @@ <h4 id="name-tcurl-2">
 interoperable and is <span class="bcp14">NOT RECOMMENDED</span>. A recommendation of an
 alternative is beyond the purview of this memo; however, the community might
 consider more semantically appropriate alternatives, for example using the
-<code>fragment</code> component to indicate client-side parameters and behaviors
-such as the name of a stream to play or publish.<a href="#section-7.1.2-4" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
+<code>fragment</code> component to identify a secondary resource such as a stream
+to play or publish.<a href="#section-7.1.2-4" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </section>
 <section id="section-7.1.3">
           <h4 id="name-app-2">

diff --git a/rtmp-errata-addenda.txt b/rtmp-errata-addenda.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 
 
                                                            M. Thornburgh
-                                                             8 July 2023
+                                                             9 July 2023
 
 
                         RTMP Errata and Addenda
@@ -640,9 +640,8 @@ Thornburgh                    Informational                    [Page 11]
    behavior is not interoperable and is NOT RECOMMENDED.  A
    recommendation of an alternative is beyond the purview of this memo;
    however, the community might consider more semantically appropriate
-   alternatives, for example using the fragment component to indicate
-   client-side parameters and behaviors such as the name of a stream to
-   play or publish.
+   alternatives, for example using the fragment component to identify a
+   secondary resource such as a stream to play or publish.
 
 7.1.3.  app
 
@@ -669,6 +668,7 @@ Thornburgh                    Informational                    [Page 11]
 
 
 
+
 Thornburgh                    Informational                    [Page 12]
 
                          RTMP Errata and Addenda               July 2023

diff --git a/rtmp-errata-addenda.xml b/rtmp-errata-addenda.xml
@@ -588,8 +588,8 @@ purpose such as the name of a stream to play or publish. This behavior is not
 interoperable and is <bcp14>NOT RECOMMENDED</bcp14>. A recommendation of an
 alternative is beyond the purview of this memo; however, the community might
 consider more semantically appropriate alternatives, for example using the
-<tt>fragment</tt> component to indicate client-side parameters and behaviors
-such as the name of a stream to play or publish.</t>
+<tt>fragment</tt> component to identify a secondary resource such as a stream
+to play or publish.</t>
 
 </section> <!-- tcUrl -->